Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific detail and a brief reason. Avoid minor grammar errors (e.g., articles, plural forms) and redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually buy a new perfume every two or three months because I enjoy trying different scents; for example, I like floral fragrances in spring and woody ones in winter.

Gợi ý: Organize into a clear topic sentence plus a supporting reason. Correct grammar (use gerunds/infinitives, subject-verb agreement) and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like because or so for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I wear perfume every morning before work because it makes me feel more confident and energized; for instance, a citrus scent helps me feel awake and positive during my commute.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear, grammatical explanation with a specific example. Fix vocabulary mistakes (e.g., ‘like’ not ‘lie’) and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like because or for example.

Ví dụ: No, I usually wouldn't buy perfume as a gift because scent preferences are very personal; for example, someone might prefer light floral fragrances while another person likes strong musk, so it's risky.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a concise reason and an example. Fix grammar (use articles, plural forms, and clearer comparisons). Use linking words like although or compared to to structure the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think perfumes are generally expensive because they often use costly ingredients and branding; for example, a designer fragrance can cost much more than a bottle of lotion or shampoo.

× Do you like perfume?

✓ Do you like perfume?

The indefinite article 'a' or the definite article 'the' is unnecessary before an uncountable noun 'perfume' in this general question. Remove the extra space and article to say 'Do you like perfume?'. Use no article for general uncountable nouns.

× I buy the perfumes every two or three months.

✓ I buy perfume every two or three months.

'Perfume' as an uncountable noun is used for general statements, so use no article and singular form. Also 'buy' in simple present is correct for habitual action. Remove 'the' and make 'perfumes' singular/uncountable.

× I like to try the new scents and the good smell.

✓ I like to try new scents and nice smells.

'New scents' is correct without 'the' for general preference. 'The good smell' is awkward; use the adjective 'nice' with the plural noun 'smells' to match 'scents'. Maintain plural to talk about varieties.

× Yes I do. I usually wear the perfume every morning before I go to work, go outside and make me more confident.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually wear perfume every morning before I go to work or go outside; it makes me more confident.

Use no article with the uncountable noun 'perfume'. Add commas and a conjunction 'or' to list actions. The clause 'make me more confident' needs a subject 'it' and the verb 'makes' in third-person singular present.

× I don't know why but when I smell that good thing it's make me more relaxed and energized in the same.

✓ I don't know why, but when I smell that nice scent, it makes me more relaxed and energized at the same time.

'It's make' is incorrect; the correct third-person singular is 'it makes'. 'Good thing' is unnatural for scent; use 'nice scent'. 'In the same' should be 'at the same time' for the intended meaning.

× No, I don't because the perfume is a personal thing.

✓ No, I don't, because perfume is a personal thing.

For general uncountable nouns do not use 'the'. Commas improve clarity. The rest of the sentence is fine; 'don't' correctly expresses refusal.

× Someone can lie this sense but someone not so it's hard to find a perfume for someone as a gift.

✓ Someone may like this scent but someone may not, so it's hard to find a perfume as a gift for someone.

'Lie' is a typo for 'like'. Use 'may' or 'might' for possibility. Rearranged phrase to 'find a perfume as a gift for someone' for natural word order and added commas. Use 'scent' instead of 'sense'.

× Even you you know what the.

✓ Even if you know what they like, it's still difficult.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and incomplete. Rewrote to a complete conditional: 'Even if you know what they like, it's still difficult.' This provides a clear meaning and correct structure.

× Yes, I do the perfume quite expensive even if the perfume has a length of the price.

✓ Yes, I do. Perfume is quite expensive, even though there is a wide range of prices.

Original had sentence fragments and incorrect phrases. Use simple present 'Perfume is quite expensive.' Replace 'has a length of the price' with 'there is a wide range of prices' to express variability. Added punctuation for clarity.

× But when compared to the other cosmetic thing, the perfume is always expensive.

✓ But compared to other cosmetics, perfume is always expensive.

Use 'compared to' without 'when', and 'other cosmetics' (plural) is more natural than 'the other cosmetic thing'. Use no article with general uncountable noun 'perfume'.