Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Definitely my favorite teacher was my English teacher in Senior High School. She was such a kind person that she not only helped me improve my English skills but also encouraged me to be a nicer person. I really appreciate her because she was such a good, positive influencer.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
No, not really. It has been many years that we haven't met each other, not to mention we have totally lost connection and to be honest, we have never been close with each other. So I guess that if we meet on the road we could never recognize each other.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
My favorite teacher helped me in a variety of methods. Especially I made some challenges and difficulties that I have to turn to her for help. For example, once I failed in an important exam, she encouraged me to lift my spirits and taught me how to do better.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Well, that's an interesting question that many people, especially my parents, often ask me. To be honest, I'm not particularly into being a teacher because I find it quite challenging to manage young children for long periods. I think the job can be exhausting and I prefer working in quieter environment.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容丰富,但部分表达略显重复,如“such a kind person”和“such a good, positive influencer”意义相近。建议避免重复表达,使用更多不同词汇来丰富语言。
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher was my English teacher in Senior High School. She was very kind and supportive, helping me improve my language skills and inspiring me to become a better person.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,但句子结构较复杂且有些冗长,影响流畅度。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher. We lost contact many years ago, and we were never very close. I don't think we would recognize each other if we met now.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,如“made some challenges”应为“faced some challenges”。建议注意语法准确性,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For instance, when I faced difficulties, I could always ask her for help. Once, after failing an important exam, she encouraged me to stay positive and showed me how to improve.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰且表达自然,但“in quieter environment”缺少冠词,且可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。建议注意冠词使用,并适当扩展理由。
Ví dụ: That's an interesting question. Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher because managing young children for long hours seems very challenging and exhausting. I prefer working in a quieter environment where I can focus better.
× It has been many years that we haven't met each other, not to mention we have totally lost connection and to be honest, we have never been close with each other.
✓ It has been many years since we last met each other; not to mention, we have totally lost connection and, to be honest, we have never been close to each other.
这里应该使用“since”引导时间状语从句,表示“自从……以来”,而不是“that”。另外,“close with each other”应改为“close to each other”,因为“close to”表示关系亲近。
× I prefer working in quieter environment.
✓ I prefer working in a quieter environment.
“environment”是可数名词,前面需要加不定冠词“a”。缺少冠词导致表达不完整。