Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子结构不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school math teacher. She was very patient and always willing to help students who found the subject difficult.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“UMM”可能是笔误，且“keep teaching with”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because the school closed a few years ago. Unfortunately, I have lost contact with most of the teachers, but I still keep in touch with some of my classmates.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然，有语法错误，如“have me understand”应改为“helped me understand”，且“improved a lot to my studies”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达和正确的语法。

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher was very patient and kind. In the afternoons, I would wait in her office, and she always took time to help me understand difficult questions. Thanks to her support, my studies improved significantly.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和未完成的句子，表达不清晰。建议避免重复，完成句子，并清楚表达观点。

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I find it hard to connect with young students. I communicate better with adults, who are more mature and easier for me to relate to.

× I like her very much because she was very patient and willing to and always willing to help students who found the subject difficulties.

✓ I like her very much because she was very patient and always willing to help students who found the subject difficult.

句中“willing to and always willing to help”结构重复且不完整，应删除多余部分，且“difficulties”应改为形容词“difficult”修饰“subject”，使表达更准确。

× Unfortunately, UMM lost contact with most of the teachers there.

✓ Unfortunately, I lost contact with most of the teachers there.

“UMM”应为第一人称代词“I”，表示说话者本人失去了联系，使用错误的代词导致句意不明。

× However, I still keep teaching with some of my classmates.

✓ However, I still keep in touch with some of my classmates.

“keep teaching with”用法错误，应为“keep in touch with”，表示保持联系。

× Early afternoon I would sit in her office to wait for her and she always took time to have me understand the question I found difficult.

✓ In the early afternoon, I would sit in her office to wait for her, and she always took time to help me understand the questions I found difficult.

“Early afternoon”应加介词“in”并置于句首作时间状语；“have me understand”表达不自然，应改为“help me understand”；“question”应为复数“questions”，与上下文一致。

× Thanks to her support, I improved a lot to my studies.

✓ Thanks to her support, I improved a lot in my studies.

“improved a lot to my studies”中介词“to”用错，应为“in”，表示在学习方面取得进步。

× No, I I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I find it difficult for me to connect with young students.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I find it difficult to connect with young students.

句中“I I”重复，应删除多余的“I”；“difficult for me to connect”结构冗余，简化为“difficult to connect”更自然。

× I feel that I can communicate well with them and I prefer walking with adults who are more mature and.

✓ I feel that I can communicate well with them, and I prefer working with adults who are more mature.

句尾“and.”不完整，应补全或删除；“walking with adults”用词不当，应为“working with adults”，表达更符合语境。