Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议避免重复表达，使用连贯的句子，并且注意语法正确。可以适当丰富细节，使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is my head teacher. He teaches me a lot about history, which makes me very curious. He often shares interesting historical mysteries that inspire me to learn more.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I am now in senior school and very busy preparing for graduation. Therefore, I haven't had time to keep in contact with them for a long time.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复词汇，并且用连接词使回答更连贯。可以增加更多具体细节。

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helps me in many ways. For example, he gives me gifts on my birthday to encourage me. Moreover, he often praises my good work, which motivates me to study harder.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达稍显简单。建议避免重复，使用更丰富的词汇和句型，并且使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I find teaching children very interesting. For instance, I can communicate with students in class and help them learn. Additionally, I would enjoy having summer and winter vacations like my school teachers.

× He teaches me a lot about the history and makes me makes me curious about the history and he always shows me the mystery about in the history.

✓ He teaches me a lot about history and makes me curious about it, and he always shows me the mysteries in history.

句中“makes me makes me”重复，应删除一个“makes me”。“the history”前不需要定冠词，且“the mystery about in the history”结构不正确，应改为“the mysteries in history”。

× Uh, no, I, I lose my touch with my primary school teacher because now I was and now I am in the senior school and I when I will nearly be graduated.

✓ Uh, no, I lost touch with my primary school teacher because now I am in senior school and I will nearly graduate.

“lose”应使用过去式“lost”表示过去的动作。“was”用法不当，应删除。短语“will nearly be graduated”应改为“will nearly graduate”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× So I didn't have any time to keep in touch with my primary school teacher and it's so long time.

✓ So I haven't had any time to keep in touch with my primary school teacher for a long time.

“didn't have”表示过去时间，但后文“it's so long time”指持续到现在，应使用现在完成时“haven't had”。“it's so long time”表达不自然，应改为“for a long time”。

× Firstly, he will give me some gifts when I was birthday, it can encourage me.

✓ Firstly, he gives me some gifts on my birthday, which encourages me.

“will give”不合适，习惯用一般现在时表示习惯动作。“when I was birthday”错误，应为“on my birthday”。“it can encourage me”应改为“which encourages me”，使句子更连贯。

× Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I think teaching teaching children is a very interesting things and for example I can communicate with the students in the class.

✓ Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I think teaching children is very interesting, and for example, I can communicate with the students in the class.

“teaching teaching”重复，应删除一个“teaching”。“a very interesting things”中“things”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应改为“very interesting”。

× Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I think teaching teaching children is a very interesting things and for example I can communicate with the students in the class.

✓ Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I think teaching children is very interesting, and for example, I can communicate with the students in the class.

“a very interesting things”中“things”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应改为“very interesting”。