Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强句子完整性和逻辑连接，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love my physics teacher from secondary school because he sparked my interest in physics by conducting interesting experiments and sharing fascinating stories with us.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的表达方式，并具体说明老师教给你的内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in contact with a few of my primary school teachers because they taught me valuable lessons, such as staying resilient when facing obstacles and being brave in difficult situations.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构较为混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Well, my favourite teachers have always been patient in giving me valuable advice when I faced difficult situations, and they were always ready to help me, which helped me overcome many challenges.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because it is a valuable and meaningful profession that helps people overcome difficult times and imparts useful skills and knowledge.

× Yes, I love my physics teacher in my secondary school because he sparked my interest in physics and by doing some interesting experiment and telling us some.

✓ Yes, I love my physics teacher in my secondary school because he sparked my interest in physics by doing some interesting experiments and telling us some.

句中“by doing some interesting experiment”中的“experiment”应为复数形式“experiments”，因为这里指的是多个实验。动名词短语“by doing”用法正确，但名词单复数错误。

× Yes, I keep contact with a few of my primary school teacher because they told me a lot of valuable merits such as keep resilient when we fit in some obstacles and be brave when we physically.

✓ Yes, I keep in contact with a few of my primary school teachers because they told me a lot of valuable lessons such as keeping resilient when we face some obstacles and being brave when we face physical challenges.

“keep contact”应为“keep in contact”，表示保持联系；“a few of my primary school teacher”中的“teacher”应为复数“teachers”；“merits”用词不当，改为“lessons”更合适；“keep resilient”应改为动名词形式“keeping resilient”；“fit in some obstacles”表达不准确，改为“face some obstacles”；“be brave when we physically”不完整，补充为“being brave when we face physical challenges”。

× Well, they are always patiently giving me some valuable advice when we are facing some difficult situations and always ready to help me which helps me pass many difficulties.

✓ Well, they are always patiently giving me some valuable advice when I am facing some difficult situations and are always ready to help me, which helps me overcome many difficulties.

“when we are facing”中的“we”应改为“I”，因为说话者指自己；“pass many difficulties”表达不当，改为“overcome many difficulties”更准确；句中缺少逗号以分隔定语从句。

× Yes, because teacher is a valuable and meaningful job for the society which could help people from passing the difficult times and teach a lot of useful skills and knowledge.

✓ Yes, because being a teacher is a valuable and meaningful job for society which can help people get through difficult times and teach a lot of useful skills and knowledge.

“teacher is a valuable and meaningful job”表达不当，应改为“being a teacher is a valuable and meaningful job”；“the society”中的“the”不必要，应去掉；“could help people from passing”表达错误，改为“can help people get through”；整体句子更通顺。