Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. She is my math teacher in my primary school and she is a beautiful woman and is always willing to help me when I meet some trouble.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still play a crucial role in my learning. I often telephone them on traditional festivals and.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
In my learning skills and how to be a better person. For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be a more patient and friendly.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Of course I do, my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with child and enjoyed sharing knowledge with the next generation.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免使用与问题无关的描述(如“beautiful woman”),并且注意语法错误,如“when I meet some trouble”应为“when I have some trouble”。建议回答更自然且简洁,突出老师的特点和帮助。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher was my primary school math teacher. She was very patient and always ready to help me whenever I had difficulties with my studies.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“play”应为“plays”,且句子不完整。建议回答时注意语法正确,句子完整,并具体说明联系的方式和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with her because she continues to influence my learning. I often call her during traditional festivals to catch up and seek advice.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答缺少主题句,且表达不完整。建议先直接回答问题,然后用具体例子支持,注意形容词的正确形式,如“more patient and friendly”应为“more patient and friendly”。
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me improve my learning skills and personal qualities. For example, she taught me to be more patient and friendly towards others.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“trans language teacher”不明确,应为“translator or language teacher”,且“child”应为“children”,时态不一致。建议回答时用正确的词汇和语法,表达清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a language teacher in the future because I enjoy working with children and sharing knowledge with the next generation.
× Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still play a crucial role in my learning.
✓ Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still plays a crucial role in my learning.
主语是单数的'teacher',谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'plays',而不是'play'。主谓一致错误需要注意动词形式的变化。
× I often telephone them on traditional festivals and.
✓ I often telephone her on traditional festivals.
前文提到的是单数的'teacher',所以代词应为单数'hers',而不是复数'them'。此外,句子末尾的'and'不完整,应去掉。
× For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be a more patient and friendly.
✓ For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be more patient and friendly.
'patient'和'friendly'是形容词,前面不需要加冠词'a',因为这里是形容词用作表语,表示状态。
× my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with child and enjoyed sharing knowledge with the next generation.
✓ my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with children and enjoy sharing knowledge with the next generation.
'child'应使用复数形式'children',表示泛指孩子们;'enjoyed'时态错误,应与前文保持一致用现在时'enjoy'。