Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have our favorite teacher in my secondary school that is my English teacher. She calls me Zhen **. *** is very patient to teach me English skills and knowledge. Moreover, he was very nice.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
No I did not. Still in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to the other cities so I don't have their contacts.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
My favorite teacher gave me various extra exercise for me to study. Moreover, she taught me a lot of exam skills such as different questions use different skills to answer.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, I want to become a teacher in my future, especially a kindergarten teacher because I love children very much. Moreover, I'm now I am work in a kindergarten play group, so I would like to be a teacher in the future.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在人称混淆(she和he),且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意人称一致性,简洁表达,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher was my English teacher in secondary school. She was very patient and helped me improve my English skills. I really appreciated her kindness and support.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态和句式,明确表达是否保持联系。
Ví dụ: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved to other cities and lost their contact information.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意单复数和句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me by giving extra exercises to practice. Moreover, she taught me exam techniques, such as using different strategies to answer different types of questions.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了清晰的观点,但存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和语法正确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a kindergarten teacher in the future because I love children. Currently, I work in a kindergarten playgroup, which makes me more confident about this career choice.
× She calls me Zhen **. *** is very patient to teach me English skills and knowledge.
✓ She calls me Zhen **. She is very patient in teaching me English skills and knowledge.
这里的错误是第三人称单数动词使用不当。原句中“*** is very patient to teach me”结构不正确,应该用“She is very patient in teaching me”来表达耐心地教。
× Moreover, he was very nice.
✓ Moreover, she was very nice.
前文提到的老师是女性,使用代词时应保持一致,不能用“he”指代女性老师,应改为“she”。
× No I did not. Still in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to the other cities so I don't have their contacts.
✓ No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to other cities, so I don't have their contacts.
原句缺少主语和谓语,导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整句子,使用正确时态和连词,使句子通顺。
× My favorite teacher gave me various extra exercise for me to study.
✓ My favorite teacher gave me various extra exercises to study.
“exercise”应使用复数形式“exercises”,因为“various”表示多种多样,需搭配复数名词。
× she taught me a lot of exam skills such as different questions use different skills to answer.
✓ She taught me a lot of exam skills, such as using different skills to answer different questions.
原句中代词和句子结构混乱,应调整为“using different skills to answer different questions”以表达清晰。
× Moreover, I'm now I am work in a kindergarten play group, so I would like to be a teacher in the future.
✓ Moreover, I am now working in a kindergarten playgroup, so I would like to be a teacher in the future.
“I'm now I am work”结构错误,应使用现在进行时“I am now working”表示正在进行的动作。