Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，句子结构不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher because she is a great role model. She is not only a professional educator but also a strong and independent woman who always encourages students to be confident.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较为清楚，但有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I was too young at that time to keep their contact information like phone numbers or social media.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但开头使用了不必要的连接词，且表达略显重复。建议开头直接回答问题，使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher helped me improve my confidence. Although I struggled academically in high school, she encouraged me to believe in myself, which helped me achieve good grades.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，句子结构不够流畅。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because it gives me a real sense of achievement. Helping students learn and grow makes me feel very excited.

× Yes, may my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher for the simple reason is she's a real model.

✓ Yes, my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher for the simple reason that she's a real model.

句子结构混乱，'may'用法错误，且缺少连接词'that'，导致句子不通顺。建议去掉'may'，并在'reason'后加'that'使句子完整。

× She not only is she is not only a professional educator, but also she's a strong and dependent woman.

✓ She is not only a professional educator, but also a strong and independent woman.

句子重复且结构混乱，'She not only is she is not only'重复出现。应简化为'She is not only... but also...'结构，且'dependent'应为'independent'。

× She always encourage people to be confident and.

✓ She always encourages people to be confident.

动词与主语不一致，'encourage'应加第三人称单数形式'encourages'，且句子末尾不应有多余的'and'。

× No, I don't have contact with my primary school teacher.

✓ No, I don't have contact with my primary school teacher.

此句中'contact with'用法正确，无需修改。

× The most important reason is that in the primary school I was too young to have A to have a contact with them, like their telephones or their WeChat and so on.

✓ The most important reason is that in primary school I was too young to have contact with them, like their telephone numbers or their WeChat and so on.

'A to have a contact'用法错误，'contact'作为不可数名词时不加冠词。'telephones'应改为'telephone numbers'更准确。

× And as I said, my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher and she helped me to improve my confidence.

✓ As I said, my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher, and she helped me improve my confidence.

句子中'helped me to improve'中'to'可省略，且句子开头不宜用'And'。

× To be honest, in the high school I was not good at studying, but she always encouraged me to be confident and stay in my own truth, so I got a good score in the end.

✓ To be honest, in high school I was not good at studying, but she always encouraged me to be confident and stay true to myself, so I got a good score in the end.

'stay in my own truth'表达不自然，应改为'stay true to myself'。此外，'in the high school'中'the'不必要。

× Yes, sure, and actually I have got the high school qualification in the university and the for the simple reason is that I think to be a teacher can offer can provide me a real sense of achievement.

✓ Yes, sure. Actually, I have got the high school qualification at university for the simple reason that I think being a teacher can provide me with a real sense of achievement.

句子结构混乱，重复使用'can offer can provide'，'in the university'应为'at university'，'to be a teacher'应改为'being a teacher'。

× If I help a student, I will feel extremely excited.

✓ If I help a student, I will feel extremely excited.

句子中情态动词使用正确，无需修改。