Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且内容丰富，但部分表达不够自然，如“believe themselves”应为“believe in themselves”，且“overcome the changes”表达不够具体。建议使用更地道的表达，并具体说明“changes”指什么。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is my high school English teacher. She is not only a professional educator but also a strong and independent woman who always encourages students to believe in themselves. For example, she shared her personal experiences to help us overcome challenges like adapting to new environments.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“haven't have chance”应为“haven't had the chance”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher. Since I was very young then, I didn't have the chance to exchange contact information with them. Over time, I lost contact and haven't been able to reconnect.

Gợi ý: 回答中有明显语法错误和表达不清，如“struck the academically”，“express my idea honestly of sex to her motivation and support”不合逻辑。建议重组句子，使用正确表达，突出具体帮助方式。

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher helped me a lot by boosting my confidence. Although I struggled academically at that time, she always encouraged me to believe in myself and express my ideas honestly. Thanks to her motivation and support, I improved my skills and achieved good results in exams.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“helping student to receive their problems”应为“helping students solve their problems”。建议注意单复数和词汇搭配，表达更准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I obtained a high school English teaching qualification when I was at university. I believe being a teacher can give me a real sense of achievement. For example, helping students solve their problems and see their progress makes me feel very excited and motivated.

× One of the main reason is that I was very young at that time, so I haven't have chance to exchange the contact information like a phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

✓ One of the main reasons is that I was very young at that time, so I haven't had a chance to exchange contact information like phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

“reason”应为复数形式“reasons”，因为前面有“one of the main”，表示多个原因中的一个。

× so I haven't have chance to exchange the contact information like a phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

✓ so I haven't had a chance to exchange contact information like phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

“haven't have”时态错误，应为现在完成时“haven't had”，表示过去到现在的经历。

× like a phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

✓ like phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

“a phone numbers”中“a”用于单数名词，但“numbers”是复数，需去掉“a”。

× And besides, as the time has passed, I have lost contact and eventually and haven't recollected.

✓ And besides, as time has passed, I have lost contact and eventually haven't reconnected.

“haven't recollected”用词错误，应为“haven't reconnected”表示失去联系。

× Although I struck the academically at that time, but she always encouraged me to believe myself and express my idea honestly of sex to her motivation and support.

✓ Although I struggled academically at that time, she always encouraged me to believe in myself and express my ideas honestly, which motivated and supported me.

句子结构混乱，“struck”应为“struggled”，去掉“but”，调整表达使句子通顺。

× she always encouraged me to believe myself and express my idea honestly of sex to her motivation and support.

✓ she always encouraged me to believe in myself and express my ideas honestly, which motivated and supported me.

“believe myself”应为“believe in myself”，“idea”应为复数“ideas”，“of sex to her motivation and support”表达不清，改为“which motivated and supported me”。

× express my idea honestly

✓ express my ideas honestly

“idea”应为复数“ideas”，表示多个想法。

× express my idea honestly of sex to her motivation and support.

✓ express my ideas honestly, which motivated and supported me.

原句中“of sex to her motivation and support”无意义且错误，改为“which motivated and supported me”更符合语境。

× I have improved my skills and eventually achieved a good goal in the exams.

✓ I improved my skills and eventually achieved good results in the exams.

前文为过去时态，保持时态一致，“have improved”改为“improved”，“a good goal”表达不当，改为“good results”。

× actually I have got high school English qualification when I was in university

✓ actually I got my high school English qualification when I was in university

“have got”与“when I was in university”时间点不符，应使用一般过去时“got”。

× helping student to receive their problems and think their progress makes me feel extremely excited and motivated.

✓ helping students to solve their problems and think about their progress makes me feel extremely excited and motivated.

“student”应为复数“students”，“receive their problems”表达错误，应为“solve their problems”，“think their progress”应为“think about their progress”。