Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like teamwork?
Thí sinh
I will say it depends on the situation. For example, if I'm doing a project which has to go on the stage to present to make a presentation, I will prefer a teamwork since I'm not good at oral.
Giám khảo
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had when I was in college. Many projects are were assigned to. Deal in a team so we would have team discussion.
Giám khảo
What do you learn from working in a team?
Thí sinh
I think the most important things in a teamwork is that you have to let others know about what you are going to do so that.
Giám khảo
What do you dislike about teamwork?
Thí sinh
I think if we work as a team, someone is going to be a free rider, which is not fair to those who really make efforts to the team.
Do you like teamwork?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題,並用更簡潔且正確的句子表達原因,避免重複。
Ví dụ: I like teamwork when the project requires a presentation because I am not confident speaking alone.
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答語法錯誤較多,且句子不完整。建議你用完整句子回答,並清楚描述經驗。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have teamed up with others in college for many projects, and we often had team discussions.
What do you learn from working in a team?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整且語法錯誤。建議你完整表達學到的重點,並用連接詞使句子更流暢。
Ví dụ: I have learned that in teamwork, it is important to communicate clearly with others so everyone knows their tasks.
What do you dislike about teamwork?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表達清楚且有邏輯,但可以用更自然的語言和多樣詞彙來提升表達。
Ví dụ: I dislike when some team members do not contribute and rely on others' efforts, which feels unfair.
× I will say it depends on the situation.
✓ I would say it depends on the situation.
The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the speaker is expressing a conditional or hypothetical opinion, so 'would' is the appropriate modal verb to indicate this.
× I will prefer a teamwork since I'm not good at oral.
✓ I will prefer teamwork since I'm not good at oral presentations.
'Teamwork' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'oral' alone is incomplete; it should be 'oral presentations' or 'oral skills'.
× Yes, I had when I was in college.
✓ Yes, I did when I was in college.
The auxiliary verb 'had' is incorrect here; the correct auxiliary for past simple questions and answers is 'did'.
× Many projects are were assigned to. Deal in a team so we would have team discussion.
✓ Many projects were assigned to us. We dealt in teams so we could have team discussions.
The sentence has mixed tenses and incomplete structure. 'Are were' is incorrect; 'were' is correct for past tense. 'Deal in a team' is awkward; 'dealt in teams' is better. Also, 'team discussion' should be plural 'team discussions' to match context.
× I think the most important things in a teamwork is that you have to let others know about what you are going to do so that.
✓ I think the most important thing in teamwork is that you have to let others know what you are going to do.
'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with singular verb 'is'. Also, 'a teamwork' is incorrect; 'teamwork' is uncountable and does not take an article.
× I think if we work as a team, someone is going to be a free rider, which is not fair to those who really make efforts to the team.
✓ I think if we work as a team, someone is going to be a free rider, which is not fair to those who really make efforts for the team.
The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when expressing effort directed towards something.