Teamwork— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Старайтесь избегать повторений и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh". Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным, с использованием связующих слов для плавного перехода между идеями.

Ví dụ: I prefer working independently because I like to take full responsibility for my tasks. Moreover, I find it challenging to rely on others, which makes solo work more comfortable for me.

Gợi ý: Избегайте разговорных выражений и числительных в неформальном виде, таких как "yeah" и "1 by 1". Используйте более формальный и точный язык, а также связывающие слова для улучшения связности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have collaborated with a friend on homework assignments. We usually divide the tasks and complete them one after another, which helps us manage the workload efficiently.

Gợi ý: Ответ можно сделать более структурированным и использовать связующие слова для логического построения. Также стоит добавить конкретные примеры или объяснения для поддержки утверждений.

Ví dụ: From working in a team, I have learned that being responsible is essential. Additionally, effective communication and mutual support are necessary because the success of our work depends on everyone's contribution.

Gợi ý: Избегайте неуместных метафор и слов-паразитов. Ответ должен быть более ясным и связным, с использованием подходящих слов и выражений для объяснения своих чувств.

Ví dụ: I dislike teamwork because it requires depending on others, which I find uncomfortable. I prefer to handle tasks independently since it gives me a sense of control and responsibility.

× I don't uh, really enjoy to be dependent on someone.

✓ I don't uh, really enjoy being dependent on someone.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'enjoy to be' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy being'. This is a common verb + -ing form error.

× we split our tasks and do it 1 by 1.

✓ we split our tasks and do them one by one.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'tasks', which is plural. Therefore, 'it' should be replaced with 'them'. Also, '1 by 1' is informal and should be 'one by one' for clarity and correctness.

× I learned that it's crucial to be a responsible person and it's necessary to communicate with the other people and support other people because our work depends on it.

✓ I have learned that it's crucial to be a responsible person and it's necessary to communicate with other people and support them because our work depends on it.

The use of simple past 'learned' is acceptable but 'have learned' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'the other people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people' without 'the'. Additionally, 'support other people' can be improved to 'support them' to avoid repetition.

× Well, I don't really like that You should be dependent person.

✓ Well, I don't really like that you should be a dependent person.

The pronoun 'You' should be lowercase 'you' as it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'dependent person' needs an article 'a' before it. This is an issue of pronoun capitalization and article usage.

× I want to be like a stray cat, uh, to take all responsibility on myself and do all tasks by myself because I really feel I have a feeling of, uh, tasks.

✓ I want to be like a stray cat, uh, to take all responsibility for myself and do all tasks by myself because I really feel I have a feeling about, uh, tasks.

The correct preposition with 'take responsibility' is 'for', not 'on'. Also, 'have a feeling of tasks' is awkward; 'have a feeling about tasks' is more natural. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.