Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「watching my face」より「looking at my face」が自然です。また、「condition of mentality and physicality」は不自然なので、「mental and physical condition」と言い換えると良いでしょう。さらに、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror every morning because it helps me check my mental and physical condition. It has become one of my daily routines.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「it was unnecessary for me to check the moving of batting or throwing a ball」は不自然で、「I needed to check my batting and throwing movements」と言い換えると良いでしょう。また、「quite big mirror」より「a large mirror」が自然です。文を短くし、明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a large mirror four years ago because I needed to check my batting and throwing movements when I practiced baseball.

Gợi ý: 回答は明確ですが、文法の誤りがあります。例えば、「my wife always take her hand mirror」は「my wife always takes her hand mirror」が正しいです。また、「when I have to check my face or my clothes I always borrow it from her」の前に接続詞を入れて文を繋げると自然です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take a mirror when I go outside. However, my wife always takes her hand mirror, so I borrow it from her whenever I need to check my face or clothes.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、不自然な表現や文法の誤りがあります。「You think some mirrors can help me feel that my room is bigger than reality」は意味が不明瞭で、「I think mirrors can make my room look bigger than it really is」と言い換えると良いでしょう。また、「I use it」より「I use them」が正しいです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I use two mirrors to decorate my room because I think they make the room look bigger than it really is.

× Yes, I prefer watching my face in early morning using mirror because it is quite effective to check my condition of mentality and physicality.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching my face in the early morning using a mirror because it is quite effective to check my mental and physical condition.

The phrase 'in early morning' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the time of day. Also, 'using mirror' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'mirror'. Additionally, 'condition of mentality and physicality' is unnatural; 'mental and physical condition' is the correct collocation.

× Yes, four years ago I practiced baseball so often and it was unnecessary for me to check the moving of batting or throwing a ball, so I bought quite big mirror.

✓ Yes, four years ago I practiced baseball often and it was unnecessary for me to check the movement of batting or throwing a ball, so I bought a quite big mirror.

The phrase 'so often' is awkward here; 'often' alone is sufficient. 'Moving of batting or throwing a ball' is incorrect; 'movement' is the correct noun. Also, 'quite big mirror' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'quite big mirror'.

× No, I don't usually take a mirror when I go outside. Instead my wife always take her hand mirror so when I have to check my face or my clothes I always borrow it from her.

✓ No, I don't usually take a mirror when I go outside. Instead, my wife always takes her hand mirror, so when I have to check my face or my clothes, I always borrow it from her.

The verb 'take' must agree with the third person singular subject 'my wife', so it should be 'takes'. Also, commas are needed after 'Instead' and before 'so' to improve sentence clarity.

× Yes, I use two mirrors to decorate my room. You think some mirrors can help me feel that my room is bigger than reality, so I use it.

✓ Yes, I use two mirrors to decorate my room. I think some mirrors can help me feel that my room is bigger than it really is, so I use them.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'You think' instead of 'I think'. Also, 'use it' is incorrect because 'mirrors' is plural, so it should be 'use them'. The phrase 'bigger than reality' is unnatural; 'bigger than it really is' is more appropriate.