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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like looking myself in the mirror because it helps me check if my outfit is appropriate and if my hairstyle looks neat. I do this twice a day, once in the morning and again before I go out to make sure I pardon myself. Well, this routine helps me get confidence throughout the day.

Giám khảo

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Thí sinh

I have never bought mirrors because I live with my parents and they often choose and buy mirrors for our home. In fact, there are three small mirrors in rooms and one near the door which are all selected by them. This way I don't need to worry about buying mirrors.

Giám khảo

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Thí sinh

No, I never take a mirror with me because I don't think it's necessary. What's more, I'm busy with my assignments every day, so I don't have much time to track my appearance. I also feel that looking in the mirror can be a distraction if I have to focus on my works.

Giám khảo

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would like to use mirrors to decorate my room, even though my room is quite full of things. Mirrors can't make my room look brighter and features which I really like. Also, when I wake up I can quickly check my appearance to get ready for the day.

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Part 1

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“looking myself”应为“looking at myself”,以及“pardon myself”用词不当,应使用更合适的表达。此外,回答稍显冗长,可以更简洁自然。建议注意介词的使用和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror because it helps me check if my outfit is appropriate and my hairstyle looks neat. I usually do this twice a day, once in the morning and once before going out. This routine helps me feel confident throughout the day.

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,如“because”、“so”。另外,“in rooms”应具体说明是哪些房间。建议丰富细节并注意表达的准确性。

Ví dụ: I have never bought mirrors because I live with my parents, and they usually choose and buy mirrors for our home. For example, there are three small mirrors in the bedrooms and one near the door, all selected by them. So, I don't need to worry about buying mirrors myself.

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达清楚,但“track my appearance”用词不当,建议使用“check my appearance”。“focus on my works”应为“focus on my work”。建议注意词汇搭配和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: No, I never take a mirror with me because I don't think it's necessary. Besides, I'm busy with my assignments every day, so I don't have much time to check my appearance. I also feel that looking in the mirror can distract me when I need to focus on my work.

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“Mirrors can't make my room look brighter and features which I really like”不通顺,建议改为“Mirrors can make my room look brighter and add features that I really like”。同时,注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to use mirrors to decorate my room, even though it is quite full of things. Mirrors can make my room look brighter and add features that I really like. Also, when I wake up, I can quickly check my appearance to get ready for the day.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I like looking myself in the mirror because it helps me check if my outfit is appropriate and if my hairstyle looks neat.

I like looking at myself in the mirror because it helps me check if my outfit is appropriate and if my hairstyle looks neat.

这里动词短语是 'look at oneself',需要介词 'at',不能直接用 'looking myself'。正确用法是 'looking at myself'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I do this twice a day, once in the morning and again before I go out to make sure I pardon myself.

I do this twice a day, once in the morning and again before I go out to make sure I prepare myself.

动词 'pardon' 意为 '原谅',与句意不符。这里应使用 'prepare myself' 表示 '准备自己'。

Singular and plural issue

× In fact, there are three small mirrors in rooms and one near the door which are all selected by them.

In fact, there are three small mirrors in the rooms and one near the door which are all selected by them.

名词 'rooms' 前缺少定冠词 'the',表示特指家中的房间。应为 'in the rooms'。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Mirrors can't make my room look brighter and features which I really like.

Mirrors can make my room look brighter and feature things which I really like.

原句中 'features' 用法不当,且句子结构不完整。应改为 'feature things' 或 'have features',这里用 'feature things' 更合适。

Incorrect use of conjunctions

× Mirrors can't make my room look brighter and features which I really like.

Mirrors can make my room look brighter and have features which I really like.

原句中 'and' 连接的两个部分不平行,且 'can't' 与句意不符。应改为 'can' 并使两个并列部分结构一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
FullFilled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
ReadyCompleted; Willing; About to; Available; Prompt
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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