Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で頻度を述べている点は良いですが、発音（繰り返しや 'my myself' など）、文法（'before go to school' → 'before I go to school'）、冗長さ（"I I"）を修正しましょう。さらに、理由や具体的な状況を一つ加えて内容を充実させ、接続詞（for example, because）を使って論理的につなげるとより自然です。練習方法としては、短い正しい文を作り、それを鏡を見ながら滑らかに話す反復練習を行ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I look at myself in the mirror about ten times a day, especially in the morning before I go to school because I want to make sure my hair and clothes look neat.

Gợi ý: 答えは過去形で購入経験を伝えている点は良いですが、文法と語順の誤り（'I have bought'→過去形 'I bought'、'because I fell it' → 'because I dropped it'）、冗長な 'because' の重複、語句の繋がりが不自然です。短く明確な文を2文以内にまとめ、過去の出来事の説明では簡潔な時間表現（'a month ago'）を使ってください。発音練習と動詞の使用（drop, break）を確認しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a new mirror a month ago because I dropped my previous one and it broke. Now I use the new mirror very carefully.

Gợi ý: 直接的に習慣を述べている点は良いですが、語順と不要な語（'when no wherever'）の間違いを直す必要があります。また、'When I do some makeup especially' は語順を整え 'especially when I do my makeup' のようにすると自然です。理由が明確なので、接続詞（because, especially）を正しく配置して文を滑らかにしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually take a small mirror with me wherever I go because I like to check my appearance regularly, especially when I do my makeup.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わりますが、文法（'there is no mirrors'→'there are no mirrors'）、語順（'when I go sleep'→'when I go to sleep'）、語彙（'I think it's scared'→'it scares me'）の誤りが目立ちます。理由を一文で簡潔にまとめ、感情表現は 'it scares me' のように正しい表現を使いましょう。短い理由＋例（e.g. horror movies）を加えると説得力が増します。発話を最後まで完結させる練習も必要です。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. There are no mirrors in my bedroom because mirrors scare me when I go to sleep, probably because of scary movies I've seen.

× 'I I look at mirrors at least 10 times a day.'

✓ 'I look at mirrors at least 10 times a day.'

'There is a duplicated subject "I I"; removing the extra "I" fixes the sentence. Ensure only one subject appears before the verb to maintain correct subject-verb structure.'

× 'I usually look at my myself in the mirror carefully in the morning before go to school and.'

✓ 'I usually look at myself carefully in the mirror in the morning before I go to school.'

'Mistakes: repeated possessive/pronoun "my myself" should be "myself"; word order of "carefully in the mirror" is more natural as "carefully in the mirror"; missing subject "I" before "go to school" and verb must be in present tense "go"; trailing conjunction "and" is incomplete and removed. To improve, avoid duplicate words, include subjects for verbs, and place adverbs where they sound natural.'

× 'Yes I have. I have bought B Mirage just one month ago because my previous one was broken because I fell it on the floor.'

✓ 'Yes, I have. I bought B Mirage just one month ago because my previous one was broken when I dropped it on the floor.'

'When giving a specific past time ("one month ago"), use the simple past "bought" rather than present perfect "have bought". "I fell it" is incorrect: the correct verb is "dropped" and you do not use an object with "fell" that way. Use "when" for the cause and place the verb "dropped" with the object "it". Also add commas for clarity.'

× 'Now I use it very with very carefully and.'

✓ 'Now I use it very carefully.'

'The phrase "very with very carefully" is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the adverb "carefully" and, if emphasizing, place "very" before it: "very carefully". Remove the trailing "and". To improve, avoid repeating intensifiers and finish the sentence.'

× 'Yes I do and when no wherever I go I usually take a mirror with me because I want to check my appearance regularly.'

✓ 'Yes I do, and wherever I go I usually take a mirror with me because I want to check my appearance regularly.'

'"when no wherever" is incorrect. Remove "when no" and add a comma before "and" for clarity. "Wherever I go" correctly expresses taking the mirror to any place. Keep pronouns consistent and remove extraneous words.'

× 'When I do some makeup especially, I want to check my face.'

✓ 'When I put on some makeup, especially, I want to check my face.'

'The verb phrase "do some makeup" is non-native; the correct collocation is "put on makeup" or "do my makeup." Use "put on some makeup" and place "especially" where it does not interrupt the verb phrase. This improves naturalness and verb usage.'

× 'No I wouldn't umm in my own room there is no mirrors because I think when I go sleep, I go to bed, I think it's scared to see the reflection in the mirror so I.'

✓ 'No, I wouldn't. In my own room there are no mirrors because I think when I go to sleep, I am scared to see the reflection in the mirror.'

'Errors: "there is no mirrors" should be "there are no mirrors" (plural agreement). Add commas and split into sentences for clarity. Use "go to sleep" (with "to") and "I am scared" rather than "it's scared." Remove the trailing incomplete clause. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns and correct expressions for feelings.'