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Part 1

Giám khảo

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Thí sinh

Yes, I remember. I remember my dream is I can stay with my parent. My parent is kindness.

Giám khảo

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Thí sinh

I want to share you my dream because it's personally.

Giám khảo

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe drink has have many special meanings because they have reflect all sort and emotions. For example, a dream can inspire you to overcome changes and help you grow as a person.

Giám khảo

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Thí sinh

I believe my dream come true because I'm very very hot. To reach my dream, I can effect to improve.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容较为简单。建议使用完整句子,明确表达梦境内容,并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember my dreams clearly. For example, I often dream about spending time with my parents because they are very kind and supportive.

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,并用完整句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to share my dreams with others because they are personal and meaningful to me.

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误(drink应为dream),语法不准确。建议注意词汇拼写,使用连贯的句子表达观点,并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they often reflect our emotions and thoughts. For instance, a dream might encourage someone to face challenges and grow personally.

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重,表达不清晰,词汇使用不当。建议使用正确的句型表达愿望,并说明实现梦想的具体方法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because I am very determined. To achieve my goals, I work hard and keep improving myself.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I remember my dream is I can stay with my parent.

I remember my dream is that I can stay with my parents.

这里的“parent”应该用复数形式“parents”,因为通常指父母双方。单复数错误会影响句子的准确表达。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× My parent is kindness.

My parents are kind.

“kindness”是名词,表示“善良”这个品质,句中需要形容词“kind”来描述父母的性格。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to share you my dream because it's personally.

I want to share my dream with you because it's personal.

“share”后面需要用介词“with”引出分享的对象,且“personally”是副词,句中应使用形容词“personal”来修饰“dream”。

Singular and plural issue

× I believe drink has have many special meanings because they have reflect all sort and emotions.

I believe dreams have many special meanings because they reflect all sorts of emotions.

“drink”应为“dreams”,且“have have”重复,应为“have”。“all sort”应为“all sorts”,表示各种各样。

Verb in the present participle form

× they have reflect all sort and emotions.

they reflect all sorts of emotions.

“have reflect”结构错误,应直接用动词“reflect”。

Singular and plural issue

× a dream can inspire you to overcome changes and help you grow as a person.

a dream can inspire you to overcome challenges and help you grow as a person.

“changes”在此语境中应为“challenges”(挑战),更符合表达意图。

Singular and plural issue

× I believe my dream come true because I'm very very hot.

I believe my dream will come true because I'm very very hardworking.

“come”应为“will come”表示将来时态;“hot”用来形容人不合适,应使用“hardworking”(勤奋的)等形容词。

Modal verb usage

× To reach my dream, I can effect to improve.

To reach my dream, I can make an effort to improve.

“effect”用错,应为“make an effort”表示努力。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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