Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答はやや冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「and but」のような接続詞の誤用を避け、より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。また、夢の内容について具体的な例を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes remember my dreams, but they are often vague and difficult to explain. However, I enjoy the mysterious feeling they give me.

Gợi ý: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と目的語の関係を明確にし、接続詞を適切に使って論理的に話を展開しましょう。具体的な理由や例を加えると効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in other people's dreams because they are often very different from real life. I enjoy listening to their stories as they can be fascinating and imaginative.

Gợi ý: 「meaning」の単数・複数の使い方に注意し、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。また、意見を述べた後に理由や具体例を加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I don't think dreams have special meanings, but some experts believe they might reveal hidden thoughts or feelings in our minds.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。また、「target them much more」の意味が不明なので、具体的に説明することが必要です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to make my dreams come true because they are often unrealistic. Instead, I set more achievable goals based on my dreams.

× Yes, I sometimes remember the contents of dreams, but in many cases these are very obscure and hard to explain for other people and but I like that feeling.

✓ Yes, I sometimes remember the contents of dreams, but in many cases these are very obscure and hard to explain to other people, but I like that feeling.

The sentence contains redundant conjunctions 'and but' which is incorrect. Use only one conjunction to connect clauses properly. Also, 'explain for other people' should be 'explain to other people' because 'explain' is followed by 'to' when indicating the listener.

× Yes, I sometimes remember the contents of dreams, but in many cases these are very obscure and hard to explain for other people and but I like that feeling.

✓ Yes, I sometimes remember the contents of dreams, but in many cases these are very obscure and hard to explain to other people, but I like that feeling.

The verb 'explain' requires the preposition 'to' before the person who receives the explanation, not 'for'. Using 'for' here is incorrect.

× Yes, I am interested in the content of other people because it is very different from the reality and the stories are usually very interesting because I like to hear the stories of.

✓ Yes, I am interested in the content of other people because it is very different from reality, and the stories are usually very interesting because I like to hear them.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'Content of other people' should be 'content of other people's dreams' or similar for clarity. The phrase 'hear the stories of' is incomplete and should be 'hear them'. Also, 'the reality' should be 'reality' without 'the'.

× Yes, I am interested in the content of other people because it is very different from the reality and the stories are usually very interesting because I like to hear the stories of.

✓ Yes, I am interested in the content of other people because it is very different from reality, and the stories are usually very interesting because I like to hear them.

The definite article 'the' before 'reality' is unnecessary here because 'reality' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Umm, I don't think there is any meaning in the dreams, but some specialists claim that there are some potential meaning of the mind or others.

✓ Umm, I don't think there is any meaning in dreams, but some specialists claim that there is some potential meaning of the mind or others.

'Meaning' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'meanings' here. Also, 'some potential meaning' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'The dreams' can be simplified to 'dreams' for general meaning.

× Umm, I don't think there is any meaning in the dreams, but some specialists claim that there are some potential meaning of the mind or others.

✓ Umm, I don't think there is any meaning in dreams, but some specialists claim that there is some potential meaning of the mind or others.

'Meaning' is uncountable and singular, so 'are some potential meaning' is incorrect. It should be 'is some potential meaning'. Also, 'the dreams' can be generalized to 'dreams'.

× No, I don't think I want to make my dream come true, because it is very difficult to realize the imagination and so I always target them much more.

✓ No, I don't think I want to make my dreams come true, because it is very difficult to realize the imagination, so I always aim for them more.

The word 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'them' later in the sentence. Also, 'target them much more' is awkward; 'aim for them more' is more natural. The conjunction 'and so' is redundant; 'so' alone suffices.