DreamsPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Thí sinh

Do you mean the 90 dreams that I had during my sleep are the aims and objectives that I want to accomplish in my life?

Giám khảo

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Thí sinh

It's OK for me to share my dreams with close friends and family members, and I don't like to speak about my dreams with everyone. I like to keep some part of my life a private, not open to every kind of person.

Giám khảo

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Thí sinh

Well, I'm not specialized in dreams, though I think it could convey some messages about things happening in life or things that might happen in the future. And it could be alarming messages for us to be careful in the future.

Giám khảo

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I wish to have my dreams come true. I'll be working harder to get them accomplished and achieved in the near future. I will plan better.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Try to answer the question directly and clearly without confusion. Avoid asking the examiner for clarification in your answer. Keep your response natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember some of the dreams I had, especially the ones that were very vivid or unusual.

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use linking words to make it more coherent and natural. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'a private' should be 'private'.

Ví dụ: I usually share my dreams with close friends and family because I trust them. However, I prefer to keep some parts of my life private and not share everything with everyone.

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Good content, but try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'in the future' twice. Use varied vocabulary to express your ideas.

Ví dụ: Although I'm not an expert, I believe dreams can convey messages about current events or possible future situations, sometimes serving as warnings to be cautious.

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive and clear. To improve, try to combine sentences using linking words and avoid redundancy like 'accomplished and achieved'.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I want to make my dreams come true, so I plan to work harder and organize my goals better in the near future.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Do you mean the 90 dreams that I had during my sleep are the aims and objectives that I want to accomplish in my life?

Do you mean the 90 dreams that I had during my sleep are the aims and objectives that I want to accomplish in my life?

No correction needed here as the sentence correctly uses plural forms 'dreams' and 'aims and objectives' matching the context.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I like to keep some part of my life a private, not open to every kind of person.

I like to keep some part of my life private, not open to every kind of person.

The article 'a' before 'private' is incorrect because 'private' is an adjective here, not a noun. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, I'm not specialized in dreams, though I think it could convey some messages about things happening in life or things that might happen in the future.

Well, I'm not specialized in dreams, though I think they could convey some messages about things happening in life or things that might happen in the future.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to 'dreams' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they' to agree in number with 'dreams'.

Modal verb usage

× And it could be alarming messages for us to be careful in the future.

And they could be alarming messages for us to be careful in the future.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'messages'. Also, 'could' is correctly used here to express possibility.

Future tense issue

× I'll be working harder to get them accomplished and achieved in the near future.

I will work harder to get them accomplished and achieved in the near future.

Using 'I'll be working' (future continuous) is less appropriate here. Simple future 'I will work' is better to express intention or promise.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
CarefulCautious; Prudent; Attentive
CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
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