Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免冗长且重复的表达，且注意语法准确性。例如，“on the society”应为“on society”。建议回答时先简洁回答问题，再用一两句具体细节支持，避免列举过多职业。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember having many dreams as a child. For example, I wanted to be a doctor because I admired how they help people and make a positive impact on society.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“on sharing”应为“sharing”，且“strengthens”主语应为复数形式。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意主谓一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they support and encourage me. Sharing dreams helps us stay focused and strengthens our friendships.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“dream on can gives”应为“dream can give”，且表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our deepest goals. For example, a clear dream can motivate people to overcome obstacles and keep pursuing their passions.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“get works experience”应为“get work experience”，“will be succeed”应为“will succeed”。建议避免句子碎片，使用连接词使句子完整且流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really want to make my dream come true because it is very important to me. Although it is challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and gain work experience, I believe that with hard work, I will succeed in the future.

× I think on sharing our dreams can help us stay focused and strengthens our friendships.

✓ I think sharing our dreams can help us stay focused and strengthen our friendships.

这里“think on sharing”中的“on”是不必要的，正确用法是直接用动名词“sharing”作宾语。另外，主语是复数“dreams”，谓语动词应使用原形“strengthen”而非“strengthens”。

× For instance, having a clear dream on can gives people motivation to overcome the obstacles and keep pursuing what they love even during difficult times.

✓ For instance, having a clear dream can give people motivation to overcome obstacles and keep pursuing what they love even during difficult times.

“having a clear dream on”中的“on”多余，应去掉。动词“gives”应改为原形“give”，因为前面有情态动词“can”。“the obstacles”中的定冠词“the”也应去掉，因为这里指的是一般障碍。

× Although I find it quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and get works experience.

✓ Although I find it quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and get work experience.

“works experience”中的“works”应为不可数名词“work”，表示“工作经验”，不加复数形式。

× But I believe that after working hard on these areas I will be succeed in the future.

✓ But I believe that after working hard on these areas I will succeed in the future.

“will be succeed”是错误的，情态动词“will”后应直接跟动词原形“succeed”，不加“be”。