Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Apni uttor ta aro natural o shothik bhabe gathan korte paren. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor proyojone supporting details dite hobe. Apnar uttore kichu redundancy ache ebong kichu bhul grammar ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje o shothik bhabe gathan korte, jate uttor ta prokrito English er moto shuney bhalo lage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember my dreams clearly. When I was in Class 3, I dreamed of becoming a billionaire because I wanted financial freedom. This dream has always motivated me to work hard.

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure e onek bhul ache, ja uttor ke bujhte oshubidha kore. Apni chesta korun prothome spostho topic sentence dite, tarpor linking words babohar kore supporting details dite. Apnar uttor e coherence o clarity barate hobe. Apni English e boro sentence na kore choto choto sentence e uttor dite paren.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share my dreams with others. For example, in Class 7, my teacher asked us about our dreams. When I shared mine, some students laughed and disrespected me, but I still believe in my dreams.

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e onek grammar o vocabulary er bhul ache, ja uttor ke onekta asspostho kore. Apni chesta korun spostho o shothik sentence gathan korte, ebong proyojone linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korte. Apnar uttor e specific details o bhalo vocabulary babohar korte hobe.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings. They motivate people to achieve their goals and live the life they desire. Without dreams, it is hard to be successful or find purpose.

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e onek redundancy o grammar er bhul ache. Apni chesta korun prothome spostho topic sentence dite, tarpor supporting details dite linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical o natural korte. Apnar uttor e boro vocabulary babohar korar chesta korben na, shothik o proyojoniyo vocabulary babohar korun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. I am dedicated and willing to work hard to achieve them, no matter what challenges I face.

× I had dreamed to be a billionaire.

✓ I dreamed of being a billionaire.

The phrase 'had dreamed' is past perfect tense, which is unnecessary here; simple past 'dreamed' is appropriate. Also, 'dreamed to be' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'dreamed of being'. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'I dreamed of being' instead of 'I had dreamed to be'. This is because 'dream of' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) to express aspirations or desires.

× I always wanted to be free from my, uh, freedom from money side.

✓ I always wanted to be free from financial problems.

The phrase 'freedom from money side' is unclear and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'free from' followed by the problem or obstacle. 'Money side' is not a proper expression; 'financial problems' or 'money issues' is better. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'free from' followed by the problem, so 'free from financial problems' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× my class teacher asked randomly other students do what you dream

✓ my class teacher randomly asked other students what they dreamed

The word order is incorrect. 'Asked randomly other students' should be 'randomly asked other students'. Also, 'do what you dream' is incorrect; it should be 'what you dreamed' to match past tense. In English (Bangladesh), the adverb 'randomly' should come before the verb 'asked', and the question should be indirect with correct tense.

× people laughing about me they think they they pinch me, they they disrespect my.

✓ people laughed at me; they thought they could pinch me and they disrespected me.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms. 'People laughing' should be 'people laughed'. 'They think they they pinch me' is unclear; likely intended 'they thought they could pinch me'. 'Disrespect my' is incorrect; it should be 'disrespected me'. In English (Bangladesh), past tense verbs are needed here, and pronouns must be correct.

× a dream can be all of the most power boosted thing that people can be.

✓ a dream can be the most powerful thing that people can have.

'Power boosted' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'powerful'. Also, 'all of the most' is redundant; 'the most' suffices. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'the most powerful' to express superlative degree, not 'power boosted'.

× Without a dream people can reach their desire life.

✓ Without a dream, people cannot reach their desired life.

'Desire life' is incorrect; the adjective form 'desired' is needed. Also, the sentence meaning suggests inability without a dream, so 'cannot' fits better. In English (Bangladesh), adjectives must be used correctly before nouns, and negation is important for meaning.

× They can be successful in her in their life.

✓ They can be successful in their life.

'In her in their life' is incorrect and redundant. The correct pronoun is 'their' to match plural subject 'they'. In English (Bangladesh), pronouns must agree in number and not be repeated unnecessarily.

× So dream is the power boosted dose to be the person who always wanted a person always wanted.

✓ So a dream is the powerful dose to become the person you always wanted to be.

'Power boosted dose' is incorrect; 'powerful dose' is better. 'To be the person who always wanted a person always wanted' is confusing; it should be 'to become the person you always wanted to be'. In English (Bangladesh), clarity and correct quantifiers and verb forms are important.

× Exactly obviously why not every person who had a dream, who had always day while the person always wanted to make the dream comes true

✓ Exactly, obviously, why not? Every person who has a dream always wants to make the dream come true.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verb forms. 'Had always day while the person always wanted' is unclear. 'Make the dream comes true' should be 'make the dream come true'. In English (Bangladesh), modal verbs and verb forms must be correct and sentences complete.

× And as a as a man, as a person, as a as a dream per dreamer person, I always wanted to my dreams come true at any cost.

✓ And as a man, as a person, as a dreamer, I always want my dreams to come true at any cost.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect verb forms. 'I always wanted to my dreams come true' is incorrect; it should be 'I always want my dreams to come true'. In English (Bangladesh), avoid repetition and use correct verb forms and infinitives.

× I do hard work, I do I am dedicated to my dreams.

✓ I work hard and I am dedicated to my dreams.

'I do hard work' is awkward; 'I work hard' is natural. 'I do I am dedicated' is incorrect; it should be 'and I am dedicated'. In English (Bangladesh), use natural expressions and correct conjunctions.