Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本的意思，但语法错误较多，句子结构不清晰，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a teacher because I admired how teachers shared knowledge with us every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确表达自己的想法，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually share my dreams with others. However, as I grow up, I am still unsure about my future goals, so I am trying to figure them out.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节和逻辑连接。建议明确表达观点，补充具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our goals and motivate us to work hard to achieve them.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，缺少具体内容。建议简化句子，明确表达自己的观点，并补充具体理由或例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because they show my ambitions and give me motivation to succeed.

× Well, when I was a little child, I'm dreaming to be an A teacher in the future because every day we go to we went to the classes and the teachers teaching us knowledge is I think it's a great and in imagine.

✓ Well, when I was a little child, I dreamed of being a teacher in the future because every day we went to classes and the teachers taught us knowledge. I think it's great and inspiring.

句中“I'm dreaming”时态不正确，应使用过去时“I dreamed”；“dreaming to be”搭配错误，正确用法是“dreamed of being”；“teachers teaching”应改为过去时“teachers taught”。这些错误涉及动词时态和动词形式的使用。

× Well, when I was a little child, I'm dreaming to be an A teacher in the future because every day we go to we went to the classes and the teachers teaching us knowledge is I think it's a great and in imagine.

✓ Well, when I was a little child, I dreamed of being a teacher in the future because every day we went to classes and the teachers taught us knowledge. I think it's great and inspiring.

句中“we go to we went to the classes”时态混用，应统一为过去时“we went to classes”；“teachers teaching”应改为过去时“teachers taught”。

× I have to share my dreams with others, umm, as well as I growing up I don't know my dreams or I want to be into which person and it's a little bit difficult for me to decide it and I'm still on the way to find it.

✓ I have to share my dreams with others. As I am growing up, I don't know what my dreams are or what kind of person I want to be. It's a little bit difficult for me to decide, and I'm still on the way to finding out.

句中“as well as I growing up”结构不正确，应改为“as I am growing up”；“I want to be into which person”表达不清，改为“what kind of person I want to be”；“decide it”中“it”多余，应去掉；“on the way to find it”应改为“on the way to finding out”。这些错误涉及代词和句子结构。

× Definitely, I think maybe everyone want to make theirselves dreams come true because dreams has always significant and share them show their ambition. So it's most of the time it's a simple of.

✓ Definitely, I think maybe everyone wants to make their dreams come true because dreams have always been significant and sharing them shows their ambition. So most of the time, it's simple.

“theirselves”是错误用法，正确为“their”；“everyone want”主谓不一致，应为“everyone wants”；“dreams has”应为“dreams have”；“share them show”缺少连接词，应改为“sharing them shows”；句尾“it's a simple of”不完整，应简化为“it's simple”。这些错误涉及代词、主谓一致和句子结构。

× Definitely, I think maybe everyone want to make theirselves dreams come true because dreams has always significant and share them show their ambition.

✓ Definitely, I think maybe everyone wants to make their dreams come true because dreams have always been significant and sharing them shows their ambition.

“everyone want”主谓不一致，应为“everyone wants”；“dreams has”应为“dreams have”；“share them show”缺少连接词，应改为“sharing them shows”。这些都是主谓一致和动词形式错误。

× I have to share my dreams with others, umm, as well as I growing up I don't know my dreams or I want to be into which person and it's a little bit difficult for me to decide it and I'm still on the way to find it.

✓ I have to share my dreams with others. As I am growing up, I don't know what my dreams are or what kind of person I want to be. It's a little bit difficult for me to decide, and I'm still on the way to finding out.

“want to be into which person”中“into”用法错误，应去掉或改为“what kind of person I want to be”；“on the way to find it”中“to”后应接动名词“finding”。这些是介词使用错误。