Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/structure errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually remember some dreams, especially the positive ones. For example, when I dream about succeeding at work, I keep that image in mind and set small goals to achieve it; conversely, if I have a disturbing dream, I try to forget it and focus on my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clear reasons and correct verb forms. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating words. Keep to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share most of my dreams with my husband and sometimes with my mother. I usually tell my husband about bad dreams because he helps me calm down, but I avoid telling my mother the worst ones because she worries easily.

Gợi ý: Clarify your opinion with a clear topic sentence and give one or two logical reasons. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and avoid unclear phrases. Improve sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g., 'reflect' instead of 'mentality').

Ví dụ: Personally, I don't think dreams have special meanings because they usually reflect what we thought about during the day. Therefore, I tend to ignore them or try to interpret them positively rather than look for deeper significance.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear example with correct phrasing. Use natural collocations (e.g., 'work hard' instead of 'do my struggle') and limit to two or three sentences. Explain motivation briefly.

Ví dụ: Yes, it depends on the dream, but for practical goals I try to make them happen. For example, if I dream of visiting Paris, I would save money and plan the trip because that goal motivates me to work harder.

× Well, it depends on the dream, if it whether it is positive or negative.

✓ Well, it depends on the dream, whether it is positive or negative.

The sentence has unnecessary words 'if it' causing awkward structure. Use 'whether' alone to present two alternatives. Keep present simple 'depends' and 'is' consistent.

× If I see a positive dream, I would always keep in my mind and try to achieve that dream.

✓ If I see a positive dream, I always keep it in my mind and try to achieve it.

When talking about habitual actions using a present conditional 'If I see...', use present simple in the main clause for routine: 'I always keep it' rather than 'I would'. Also replace 'keep in my mind' with 'keep it in my mind' to include the object.

× However, if it's a negative dream that if for instance if I'm failing an exam or somebody is bothering me, so I would just ignore that dream.

✓ However, if it's a negative dream, for instance if I'm failing an exam or somebody is bothering me, I just ignore that dream.

Remove redundant words 'that if' and 'so' to correct structure. For present hypothetical/habitual situations, use present simple 'I just ignore' rather than 'I would just ignore'. Ensure clauses are connected clearly with commas.

× Overall I would.

✓ Overall, I would ignore negative dreams.

The original is an incomplete sentence lacking an object and clear verb. Expand to a full sentence that completes the idea: 'I would ignore negative dreams.' Add comma after 'Overall' for clarity.

× I only share my dreams with my husband and my mother.

✓ I only share my dreams with my husband and my mother.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple properly expresses habitual action. No change needed.

× Whenever I have a bad one, I always told tell my husband.

✓ Whenever I have a bad one, I always tell my husband.

Use present simple 'tell' for habitual actions. 'Told' is past tense and incorrect here. Remove the extra word 'told'.

× However, I do not tell the worst ones to my mother because she always become tensed about me.

✓ However, I do not tell the worst ones to my mother because she always becomes tense about me.

Use third person singular present 'becomes' not 'become'. Use adjective 'tense' (not 'tensed') to describe her state. 'About me' is acceptable.

× So to answer your question, yes I share my dreams to my with my family.

✓ So to answer your question, yes I share my dreams with my family.

Use the verb 'share' with the preposition 'with', not 'to'. Remove the extra words 'to my' which are redundant.

× To be very honest with you, I believe that dreams are nothing.

✓ To be very honest with you, I believe that dreams mean nothing.

Saying 'dreams are nothing' is grammatically possible but awkward. 'Dreams mean nothing' is clearer: subject 'dreams' and verb 'mean' correctly express the intended idea.

× It is only the thing that you will always see your dream.

✓ They are just things you see in your dreams.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to dreams and a concise structure 'things you see in your dreams'.

× Whatever you are thinking about the thing in the day.

✓ They are often related to what you think about during the day.

Fix tense and sentence completeness: use present simple 'are' and phrase 'what you think about during the day' to clarify meaning.

× That means your mentality is about after that thing.

✓ That means your mind is focused on that thing afterwards.

'Mentality is about after that thing' is ungrammatical. Replace with natural phrasing: 'your mind is focused on that thing afterwards.' This clarifies temporal relation and subject.

× So I believe that it has nothing, meaning you should ignore it or take it a positive.

✓ So I believe that it has no meaning; you should ignore it or take it positively.

Use 'has no meaning' instead of 'has nothing'. 'Take it a positive' is incorrect; use adverb 'positively'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses.

× It always depends on the dream.

✓ It always depends on the dream.

This sentence is correct in present simple and expresses the intended general truth. No change needed.

× For instance, if I am seeing a dream to go to Paris, then I would definitely do my struggle to go to Paris for travelling.

✓ For instance, if I dream of going to Paris, I would definitely make an effort to travel there.

Use 'dream of doing' rather than 'am seeing a dream to'. 'Make an effort' is natural instead of 'do my struggle'. Use 'travel there' not 'for travelling'.

× I believe that these kinds of dream would give me a poster of energy so I can take it in a better way.

✓ I believe that these kinds of dreams would give me a boost of energy so I can approach it better.

Use plural 'dreams' to match 'these kinds', and 'boost of energy' is the correct idiom instead of 'poster of energy'. 'Approach it better' is clearer than 'take it in a better way'.