Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сократите и упорядочьте ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, потом дайте краткую конкретную деталь и завершите одним предложением с эмоцией. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (времена, артикли) и избегайте повторов («want to be want to have»). Используйте связку для логики (for example, then, and).

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember some dreams. For example, when I was about eight I dreamed of having a pet, and my mother bought one for my birthday. It was an unforgettable present and I was very grateful to her.

Gợi ý: Улучшите ясность и точность: избегайте бессвязных фраз («personal objects», «Here's our streams») и повторов. Начните с общей позиции, затем приведите конкретный пример и используйте связующие слова (for example, because, and). Поправьте лексику (share dreams / share my goals).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often share my dreams and goals with my parents and close friends because their advice is motivating and practical. For example, I recently told a friend about my career plan and she suggested useful courses. I also like hearing other people's dreams since it reveals their values and gives me new ideas.

Gợi ý: Чётко сформулируйте точку зрения и приведите одно-два объясняющих предложения с примерами. Избегайте нелогичных высказываний и исправьте грамматику (например, "what someone's dream become true?"). Используйте связки (because, for example, however).

Ví dụ: I don't think dreams have special meanings because they are usually just fantasies from our imagination. For example, I sometimes dream about flying, but I don't interpret it as a sign; it just reflects my thoughts or feelings. However, some people find personal meaning in their dreams.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте цель чётко, избегайте неправильных словосочетаний («career alive», «long term certification», «larger age») и дайте конкретный пример плана: краткосрочные шаги и результат. Используйте связки (for instance, by doing this, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me direction and motivation. For instance, I hope to build a career in software engineering, so I set short-term goals like completing online courses and building projects. By doing these steps I can make progress toward my long-term goal.

× Yes, of course I can remember the dreams I had for example when I was about 8 years old.

✓ Yes, of course I remember the dreams I had, for example, when I was about eight years old.

The original uses 'can remember' which is grammatical but wordier; present simple 'remember' fits better for a general ability. Add commas to separate the clause 'for example' and write numbers as words in formal writing. Also improve sentence flow by keeping tense consistent.

× I really want to be want to have a pet and my mother buy it for me on my birthday and it was unforgettable present and I really grateful with her.

✓ I really wanted to have a pet, and my mother bought one for me on my birthday; it was an unforgettable present, and I was really grateful to her.

Multiple errors: tense consistency requires past tense ('wanted', 'bought', 'was grateful'). 'Buy' should be past 'bought'. Use 'one' as a pronoun for 'pet' and include the article 'an' before 'unforgettable present'. Use 'grateful to' rather than 'grateful with'. Also split into clearer clauses and use punctuation.

× Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with my parents or friends, especially if we relate to career goals or personal objects, because their feedback can be motivating and practical for me.

✓ Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with my parents or friends, especially when they relate to career goals or personal objectives, because their feedback can be motivating and practical for me.

Use 'when' rather than 'if' for typical situations. 'We relate' is incorrect; use 'they relate' to refer to 'dreams' (pronoun agreement). 'Personal objects' is wrong word choice; use 'personal objectives' or 'personal goals'.

× But I'm also quite interested in Here's our streams since it helps me to understand their values and help inspire new ideas.

✓ But I'm also quite interested in other people's dreams since they help me understand their values and inspire new ideas.

Original has severe structure issues: 'Here's our streams' is garbled. Use 'other people's dreams'. 'Helps me to understand' is acceptable but 'help me understand' is more natural with plural 'dreams' so change verb to 'help'. Remove redundant 'help' before 'inspire'.

× Actually I don't think that dreams have a special meaning, because all that I haven't dream is not real and in my opinion it is fantasy.

✓ Actually, I don't think that dreams have a special meaning, because everything that I dream about is not real and, in my opinion, it is fantasy.

Incorrect negative structure 'haven't dream' should be 'I dream about' or 'I have dreamed' depending on meaning. 'All that I haven't dream' is ungrammatical. Use 'everything that I dream about' or 'all my dreams' and ensure verb form 'dream' (present) or 'have dreamed' (present perfect). Added commas for clarity.

× What someone's dream become true?

✓ Can someone's dream become true?

This is an incorrect question structure. Use auxiliary 'Can' to form a yes/no question and use base verb 'become'. Also include possessive 'someone's' before 'dream'.

× Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me direction and motivation in life.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me direction and motivation in life.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Only minor punctuation (comma before 'because' is optional here) could be added for clarity, but no grammatical correction needed.

× For instant, pursuing a career alive would bring long term certification and I actively said set short term goals to progress towards that larger age.

✓ For instance, pursuing a career in medicine would bring long-term satisfaction, and I actively set short-term goals to progress towards that larger aim.

Multiple problems: 'For instant' should be 'For instance'. 'Career alive' is incorrect — likely 'a career in law' or 'a career in medicine' or 'a fulfilling career'; I chose 'a career in medicine' as a plausible example but you should replace it with the intended field. 'Long term certification' is odd; likely 'long-term satisfaction' or 'long-term career stability'. 'Actively said set' is incorrect; use 'actively set'. 'Towards that larger age' is wrong; use 'that larger aim' or 'that long-term goal'. Hyphenate compound adjectives like 'long-term' and 'short-term'.