Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (use past/simple continuous and proper tense forms). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't usually remember my dreams clearly. However, occasionally I wake up and can recall a vivid dream for a short time, especially if it was emotional or strange.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give one specific reason and an example. Fix grammar (use plural/singular correctly, avoid filler words) and use a linking word to explain the benefit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often share funny or unusual dreams with my friends. For example, last week I told them about a dream where I could fly, and that led to a fun conversation which helped us feel closer.

Gợi ý: Give a clear position (yes/no/unsure) in the first sentence, then support it with a specific reason and a linking word. Correct grammar ("I'm kind of a believer" or "I kind of believe") and avoid vague phrasing.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, but I tend to think some dreams can have meaning because they sometimes reflect my feelings or worries. For instance, when I'm stressed about exams I often dream about failing, which seems related to my real life.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a specific realistic goal and briefly contrast it with unrealistic dreams. Improve grammar ("I dream about" -> "I dream of" or "I dream about getting"; use consistent tense). Use a linking word to show contrast.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to make some of my dreams come true, especially academic goals like getting high scores in exams. However, I accept that some of my more fantastical dreams are unrealistic, so I focus on achievable steps like studying regularly.

× Wow that's interesting, sometimes I can't remember the dreams but sometimes when I woke up and I forgot all the dreams I had so it's hard to say.

✓ Wow that's interesting. Sometimes I can't remember my dreams, and sometimes when I wake up I have forgotten all the dreams I had, so it's hard to say.

Mixed tense use: 'woke up' and 'forgot' are past tense while the general statement should be in present simple or present perfect for habitual or recent events. Use 'wake up' for habitual action and 'have forgotten' (present perfect) for recent memory loss. Also change 'the dreams' to 'my dreams' for natural reference and add punctuation to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes I do and sometimes when I have a funny and interesting dreams I would share it with my friends.

✓ Yes I do, and sometimes when I have funny and interesting dreams I share them with my friends.

Number agreement and article/adjective placement: 'a funny and interesting dreams' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'dreams'. Remove 'a' and make 'dreams' plural. Use simple present 'share' for habitual action rather than 'would share'. Change pronoun 'it' to plural 'them' to match 'dreams'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× It can help us to keep a close relationship and and I feel that is a.

✓ It can help us maintain a close relationship, and I feel that way.

Awkward phrasing and repetition: 'keep a close relationship' is less natural than 'maintain a close relationship'. Remove duplicate 'and and'. The clause 'I feel that is a' is incomplete; replace with 'I feel that way' to complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Well, actually I don't know about that, but some people said that some dreams have special meanings.

✓ Well, actually I don't know about that, but some people say that some dreams have special meanings.

Tense inconsistency: 'said' is past tense while the statement is general; use present simple 'say' for general opinions. Keep 'have' in present simple since it's general truth. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Actually, I'm kind of believe in that, but others said no because I dreamed some unrealistic dreams.

✓ Actually, I kind of believe in that, but others say no because I have dreamed some unrealistic dreams.

Form and tense errors: 'I'm kind of believe' is ungrammatical; use 'I kind of believe' or 'I'm kind of a believer'. 'Said' should be 'say' for general opinions. 'I dreamed some unrealistic dreams' is acceptable but 'I have dreamed' (present perfect) emphasizes experience; either is acceptable depending on intent. Also keep consistent tense for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, I do, because I dreams about.

✓ Yes, I do, because I dream about it.

Third-person singular error combined with sentence fragment: 'I dreams' is incorrect for first person; use 'I dream'. The original sentence is incomplete ('dreams about' what?). Add 'it' to complete the thought or specify the object. Use simple present for habitual desire. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I got a great, great score in the study so I would be happy about that.

✓ I get great scores in my studies, so I would be happy about that.

Tense and noun choice: 'I got' is past tense but context asks about making dreams come true (general desire), so present simple 'I get' (habitual) fits better. 'Score in the study' is unnatural; use 'scores in my studies'. Alternatively, if referring to a specific past event, keep past tense consistently: 'I got a great score in my studies, so I was happy.' Grammar problem type ID:10

× But some of my dreams are unrealistic, so maybe I don't want that.

✓ But some of my dreams are unrealistic, so maybe I don't want them to come true.

Pronoun and clarity: 'I don't want that' is vague; refer back to 'dreams' with 'them' and clarify 'to come true' to match the question about making dreams come true. Maintain present simple for general preference. Grammar problem type ID:6