Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often send emails?
Thí sinh
Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient way to communicate such as we chat.
Giám khảo
When would you send emails to others?
Thí sinh
I usually send emails to others in the evening because people are often free from work or study at that time. Therefore, it's a good opportunity to communicate and discuss important matters without interruptions.
Giám khảo
Is sending emails popular in China?
Thí sinh
Well, send emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China. However, nowadays people prefer using instant messaging apps like We Chat.
Giám khảo
Do you think sending emails will be more or less popular in the future?
Thí sinh
Well I think send the emails will be less popular in the future becauses nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.
Do you often send emails?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“other more convenient way”应为“other more convenient ways”,且“we chat”应为“WeChat”。建议注意语法和专有名词的正确使用,同时回答可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often send emails because in China, people usually use more convenient ways to communicate, such as WeChat.
When would you send emails to others?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,使用了连接词“therefore”,内容具体。但可以增加更多细节,如举例说明重要事项的类型,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually send emails in the evening because people are free from work or study then. Therefore, it's a good time to discuss important matters, such as project updates or meeting arrangements, without interruptions.
Is sending emails popular in China?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,“send emails used to be”应为“sending emails used to be”,且“We Chat”应为“WeChat”。建议注意动名词的使用和专有名词拼写,同时回答可以更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China. However, nowadays, people prefer using instant messaging apps like WeChat.
Do you think sending emails will be more or less popular in the future?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“send the emails”应为“sending emails”,“becauses”应为“because”。建议注意动名词和连词的正确使用,同时可以增加预测的具体原因,使回答更有说服力。
Ví dụ: I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient, such as instant messaging and video calls.
× Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient way to communicate such as we chat.
✓ Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient ways to communicate such as WeChat.
这里的“way”应该用复数形式“ways”,因为前面用了“other”,表示多种方式。中文解释:当表示多种方式时,名词应使用复数形式。
× Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient way to communicate such as we chat.
✓ Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient ways to communicate, such as WeChat.
“such as”前面应加逗号,且“WeChat”是专有名词,首字母应大写。中文解释:列举时“such as”前应加逗号,专有名词首字母需大写。
× Well, send emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.
✓ Well, sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.
这里“send emails”应改为动名词形式“sending emails”,表示动作的名词化。中文解释:动词作主语时应使用动名词形式。
× Well, send emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.
✓ Well, sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.
“send”应改为动名词“sending”,表示动作的名词形式。中文解释:动词作主语时应使用动名词形式。
× Well I think send the emails will be less popular in the future becauses nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.
✓ Well, I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.
“send the emails”应改为动名词“sending emails”,且“becauses”拼写错误,应为“because”。中文解释:动词作主语时用动名词,拼写错误需纠正。
× Well I think send the emails will be less popular in the future becauses nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.
✓ Well, I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.
句首“Well”后应加逗号,且“because”拼写错误。中文解释:句首插入语后应加逗号,拼写错误需纠正。