Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和啰嗦现象。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意语法正确性，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often send emails because I work as a marketing manager in Hubei Province. My job involves expanding our client base, so I regularly email potential clients to establish partnerships.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答问题，再用连贯的句子补充细节，注意语法和句子结构。

Ví dụ: I send emails almost every day, especially when I need to arrange conferences or confirm important information with others.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用准确词汇，结构清晰地表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I think traditional email is less popular in China because smartphones have become widespread. Instant messaging apps like WeChat are more popular, especially among young people.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议先明确观点，再用完整连贯的句子详细说明理由，避免断句和语法错误。

Ví dụ: I believe sending emails will remain essential in the workplace, even though instant messaging apps are becoming more popular due to smartphones and laptops.

× So one of my job is to expand our client scale.

✓ So one of my jobs is to expand our client scale.

这里的 'one of my job' 中，'job' 应该用复数形式 'jobs'，因为 'one of' 后面接的是复数名词。

× I need to send many emails to my potential clients.

✓ I need to send many emails to my potential clients.

此句无语法错误，'emails' 和 'clients' 均正确使用复数形式。

× I did arrange a conference or I need to make sure some important informations I will send an e-mail to.

✓ I did arrange a conference or I need to make sure some important information I will send an e-mail to.

'informations' 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应改为 'information'。

× I need to make sure some important informations I will send an e-mail to.

✓ I need to make sure of some important information before I send an e-mail.

'make sure' 后面通常接介词 'of'，且原句结构不完整，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I don't think the transitional e-mail is popular in China with the popular type popularisation of smartphones.

✓ I don't think traditional e-mail is popular in China with the popularization of smartphones.

'transitional' 应为 'traditional'（传统的），'popular type popularisation' 结构重复且错误，应改为 'popularization'。

× The instant messages more popular in the young generation.

✓ Instant messages are more popular among the young generation.

'instant messages' 是复数，谓语动词应为 'are'，且 'more popular' 需要完整句子结构。

× If you can use some instant platforms like We Chat or Red nodes you would find.

✓ If you use some instant platforms like WeChat or Red nodes, you will find out.

'If' 条件句中一般用一般现在时，'would' 应改为 'will'，且 'We Chat' 应为 'WeChat'。

× I think sending e-mail is essential for People's Daily life, especially when they are in a work environment.

✓ I think sending e-mails is essential for people's daily life, especially when they are in a work environment.

'e-mail' 应用复数 'e-mails'，'People's Daily life' 中 'Daily' 应小写，且 'people's' 指代人们的生活。

× But with the development of smartphones and popular rage, popularisation of. Laptops.

✓ But with the development and popularization of smartphones and laptops,

原句断句错误，'popular rage' 应为 'popularization'，且 'popularisation of laptops' 应与前文连贯。

× So I think there's the instant messaging where.

✓ So I think instant messaging will be more popular.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。