Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: I don't often send emails because I usually use messaging apps to communicate with others since they are faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和语法，表达更清晰，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually send emails to my teachers when I have questions or need to submit assignments because emails are more formal and appropriate for school communication.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但表达可以更自然，句子结构可以更丰富。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并且丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Sending emails in China depends on age groups. University students prefer chatting on apps, while office workers often use emails for formal communication.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意语法准确性，使用更地道的表达，并且句子更简洁。

Ví dụ: I believe emails will become less popular in the future because many companies encourage employees to use communication apps and internal platforms for faster messaging.

× Now in our daily life, we actually often send messages on communicated apps instead of sending emails because emails may think that more formal and.

✓ Now in our daily life, we actually often send messages on communication apps instead of sending emails because emails are considered more formal.

句中“communicated apps”应为“communication apps”，因为这里需要名词形式表示“通讯应用”。另外，原句“emails may think that more formal and”结构不完整且用词错误，应改为“emails are considered more formal”来表达邮件更正式的意思。

× If I needed to ask something about my teachers, I will send emails to them because it's be more formal and decent.

✓ If I need to ask something about my teachers, I will send emails to them because it's more formal and decent.

条件句中使用“if I needed”表示虚拟语气，但后半句用“will”表示将来时，时态不一致。应使用一般现在时“if I need”来表达真实条件句。并且“it's be”应改为“it's”或“it is”，去掉多余的“be”。

× Sometimes teacher always tell us to send our assignments or e-mail.

✓ Sometimes teachers always tell us to send our assignments or emails.

“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”，因为指的是多位老师。并且“e-mail”应改为复数“emails”，与“assignments”保持一致。

× If we are university students, we just chat on communication apps.

✓ If we are university students, we just chat on communication apps.

该句无语法错误，复数形式使用正确，无需修改。

× But if you are the staff or workers, you need to send emails.

✓ But if you are staff or a worker, you need to send emails.

“staff”作为集合名词通常不加冠词，且“workers”应与“staff”保持一致，改为单数“a worker”或复数“workers”。这里建议改为“staff or a worker”以保持语义清晰。

× I think sending in emails will be less popular in the future because more and more companies ask their staff to send messages by communication apps and they have their OA segment to use.

✓ I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because more and more companies ask their staff to send messages via communication apps and they have their OA system to use.

“sending in emails”中“in”多余，应去掉。表达“通过某种方式”应使用介词“via”而非“by”。“OA segment”表达不准确，应改为“OA system”（办公自动化系统）。