Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and somewhat unclear due to grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating ideas and focus on clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often send emails, especially when I need to share important documents with my teachers. Additionally, I sometimes email my friends for fun conversations during my free time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples with linking words. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to improve fluency and coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually send emails when I need to share important documents with my professors. Also, I use emails to contact companies like Amazon when I want to return a product.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks confidence and contains many fillers and unclear phrases. Try to answer directly, avoid unnecessary hesitation, and provide logical reasoning or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I have never been to China, so I am not sure about their habits. However, I think people there use emails mainly to send important documents, such as presentations to their professors.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and some grammar errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, use correct verb forms and vocabulary.

Ví dụ: I believe emails will be less popular in the future because many people prefer social media platforms like Instagram and Snapchat to communicate. However, emails will still be used for formal purposes, such as sending presentations to teachers.

× Well, ideally depend on the situations, but sometime whenever I had to send an important files or documents at a times I prefer to send an emails to my teachers or professors and however whenever I feel a bored at a time for my recreation I prefer to to send an e-mail specially along with my friends and we do did a lot of funds together and create an elephant memory.

✓ Well, I ideally depend on the situations, but sometimes whenever I have to send important files or documents at times, I prefer to send emails to my teachers or professors. However, whenever I feel bored at times for my recreation, I prefer to send an e-mail especially with my friends, and we do a lot of fun together and create elephant memories.

The sentence has multiple present tense issues such as missing subject 'I' before 'ideally depend', incorrect verb tense 'had' instead of 'have', incorrect plural forms 'an important files' should be 'important files', and 'an emails' should be 'emails'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', and 'feel a bored' should be 'feel bored'. The phrase 'do did a lot of funds' is incorrect; it should be 'do a lot of fun'. These corrections align the sentence with proper present tense usage and plural forms.

× Well, as I mentioned earlier, it mainly depend on the situations. Whenever I have to attach my important documents, files and to share with my professor at a time, I prefer to use the emails and apart from it sometime when I have to contact with the with the Amazons to return my product at a time, I also.

✓ Well, as I mentioned earlier, it mainly depends on the situations. Whenever I have to attach my important documents and files to share with my professor at a time, I prefer to use emails. Apart from that, sometimes when I have to contact Amazon to return my product, I also do so.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'to share with my professor at a time' is awkward; 'to share with my professor' suffices. 'Apart from it sometime' should be 'Apart from that, sometimes'. 'Contact with the with the Amazons' is incorrect; it should be 'contact Amazon'. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

× Well, uh, I was, uh, was check on defence. I have never visited in China and I have no idea related to their trends. Uh, but I feel that most of the times people prefer to use the emails, uh, sometime whenever they have to send important documents to others, uh, for example, their presentations linked to their professor at the time, they prefer to send an e-mail.

✓ Well, uh, I was, uh, checking on defense. I have never visited China and I have no idea about their trends. Uh, but I feel that most of the time people prefer to use emails. Sometimes whenever they have to send important documents to others, for example, their presentations linked to their professor, they prefer to send an e-mail.

The phrase 'was check' is incorrect; it should be 'was checking' (past continuous tense). 'Visited in China' should be 'visited China' (no preposition needed). 'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time' (correct quantifier). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. These corrections improve tense consistency and preposition usage.

× Well, I, umm, I don't think so that the emails would be more popular in the future because nowadays people are very addictive to using these social platform like Instagram and Snapchat. And most of the time they prefer to use it in order to conversate with their friends also. However, in case if they want to link their presentations, uh, with their teachers or professors at a time, they prefer to send her emails.

✓ Well, I, umm, don't think that emails will be more popular in the future because nowadays people are very addicted to using social platforms like Instagram and Snapchat. Most of the time, they prefer to use them to communicate with their friends. However, if they want to share their presentations with their teachers or professors, they prefer to send their emails.

The modal verb 'would be' is replaced with 'will be' to express future prediction more naturally. 'Addictive' is an adjective describing something that causes addiction; the correct form is 'addicted' (past participle adjective). 'Conversate' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'communicate'. 'Link their presentations' is unclear; 'share their presentations' is better. 'Send her emails' should be 'send their emails' to match the plural subject. These corrections improve modal verb usage and word choice.