Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct article usage, and give one brief supporting detail. Use linking phrase for clarity.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely send emails now because I work as a hospital nurse and most communication is face‑to‑face with patients and colleagues. However, I occasionally email doctors or family members when I need to share test results.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear condition and correct vocabulary. Use one linking word (for example, if/when) and provide a complete, specific example. Avoid hesitations and grammatical errors (verb forms, articles, plural/singular).

Ví dụ: I would send emails when I need to inform a patient’s relatives about medical appointments. For example, if a patient needs a gastroscopy, I email the family to explain the procedure, confirm the time, and ask for consent.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use accurate phrases (online work, digital communication) and avoid unclear names or words. Limit to two sentences max and use a linking word like because or for example.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is very popular because most businesses and schools rely on computers and smartphones for communication. For example, people often use email for official notices, job applications, and school communications.

Gợi ý: Give a direct prediction and a concise reason. Use varied vocabulary (increase, digital communication, alternatives like messaging apps) and avoid repetition. One or two supporting points are enough.

Ví dụ: I think email will remain popular and may even increase for formal communication because businesses and institutions need reliable records. However, informal messaging apps may grow for casual chat, while email stays central for official matters.

× Uh, now I don't because I am not working in a office and I, uh, I'm taking care of the patients in the hospital, so I don't have, uh, many chances to, uh, send them emails.

✓ Uh, now I don't because I am not working in an office and I, uh, I'm taking care of patients in the hospital, so I don't have, uh, many chances to, uh, send them emails.

Use 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound: 'an office' not 'a office'. Also, when speaking generally about people in a category we usually omit 'the': 'patients' (general) rather than 'the patients' unless referring to specific patients. Suggestion: Use 'an' and drop 'the' when making general statements about groups.

× If I have to send emails to others I have be I have to be in some suggestions like if my patient have to do the pantoscope to examine their stomach then I have to ask their family to umm.

✓ If I have to send emails to others, I have to be in certain situations, like if my patient has to have an endoscopy to examine their stomach, then I have to ask their family to...

Multiple errors: 'I have be' should be 'I have to' (verb phrase). 'some suggestions' is incorrect collocation; 'certain situations' fits. Subject-verb agreement: singular 'my patient' requires 'has' not 'have'. 'pantoscope' is the wrong term; likely 'endoscopy' or 'gastroscopy' and 'to have an endoscopy' is correct. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to 'I have to be in certain situations' and use correct medical term and matching verb forms.

× Yeah, sure, because nowadays we, uh, we are using the computers. So uh, basically we uh, do a lot of online work, for example, Stan Sandler send, sending the emails and and just do something in the connection way.

✓ Yeah, sure, because nowadays we use computers. So, basically we do a lot of online work, for example, sending emails and doing other things online.

Use simple present 'use' and 'do' for habitual actions rather than 'are using' unless emphasizing a temporary action. Remove unnecessary names and repetition. 'send, sending the emails' is unclear; gerund 'sending emails' is correct. 'do something in the connection way' is awkward; 'doing other things online' is natural. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and clearer phrases like 'sending emails' and 'doing other things online.'

× It must be more and more because we have to adapt the new life of technology, so we have to send more emails than before because, because it is what it is.

✓ It will become more and more common because we have to adapt to the new technological way of life, so we will send more emails than before.

'Must be more and more' is awkward for future trend; 'will become more and more common' expresses future increase. Use 'adapt to' (preposition) not 'adapt the'. 'the new life of technology' is unnatural; 'new technological way of life' is clearer. Remove filler 'because it is what it is.' Suggestion: use 'will' for future predictions and correct preposition 'adapt to.'

× we have to adapt the new life of technology

✓ we have to adapt to the new technological way of life

The verb 'adapt' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating what you change to fit. Also rephrase 'the new life of technology' to 'the new technological way of life' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'adapt to' + noun phrase describing what is being adapted to.