Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は要点に触れていますが、文法や語順の誤り、あいまいな語句（walking? stay, update）があり、表現が不自然です。改善点：1) 現在習慣を述べる場合は現在形を使う（I send emails every day）。2) 不必要な語を削り、明確に理由を示す（to coordinate work / share updates）。3) 文を最大5文以内にまとめ、接続詞（because, so, and）で論理をつなぐ。練習方法：日常的な習慣を表す簡潔な英文を作り、主語＋現在形＋目的語＋理由の順で書いて音読する。

Ví dụ: I send emails every day to communicate with my coworkers. I mainly use them to share updates about projects and to coordinate schedules. Because email is quick and keeps a record, it helps me save time and avoid misunderstandings.

Gợi ý: 内容は合っていますが、時制や語順、句読点の誤りが目立ちます。改善点：1) 習慣を述べる際は現在形（I always send emails）。2) 不自然な句（contact with）を修正（contact）し、具体例は一文でまとめる。3) 接続詞で理由をつなぎ、簡潔に答える。練習方法：具体的な状況（誘い、詳細の確認）を示す短い文を作り、意図と手段を明確に述べる練習をする。

Ví dụ: I usually send emails when I want to arrange meeting with friends. I find email convenient for sharing details like the meeting place and departure time. Also, it’s helpful when someone needs to check the plan later.

Gợi ý: 回答は率直ですが、文法と語彙が不十分で不明瞭です。改善点：1) 知らないことを伝えるときは簡潔に（I’m not from China, so I’m not sure）。2) 推測は確信を表す語（I guess / probably）と具体例（business or personal use）で補う。3) 冗長な表現や重複（about about）を避ける。練習方法：不確かな情報を述べるテンプレを作り、その後に推測と理由を一文で続ける練習をする。

Ví dụ: I’m not from China, so I’m not sure. However, I would guess that email is commonly used there for work and to contact friends. In business contexts especially, email is probably important for formal communication.

Gợi ý: 考えはあるものの、文法・語法の誤りと冗長な表現が目立ちます。改善点：1) 主張は明確に短く述べる（I think email will be more popular）。2) 理由は一つか二つに絞り、接続表現を適切に使う（because, as）。3) ‘time-consuming’などの形容詞や動詞の形を正しく使う。練習方法：未来の予測を述べる文（I think... will...）と理由を一文で練習し、技術的な語彙（AI, automation, convenience）を取り入れる。

Ví dụ: I think email will become more popular in the future because AI and automation will make composing messages faster. As a result, people may prefer email for clear, recorded communication rather than lengthy phone calls.

× I sent a e-mail every day.

✓ I send an e-mail every day.

The student used past tense 'sent' while describing a habitual action. Habitual actions require the present simple. Also article 'a' before 'e-mail' is fine but 'an' is more natural before a vowel sound: 'an e-mail'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines: 'I send an e-mail every day.'

× I have to contact with my coworker about my walking and it helps me stay, update and avoid wasting time.

✓ I have to contact my coworker about my work, and it helps me stay updated and avoid wasting time.

The verb 'contact' should not be followed by 'with' in this context: say 'contact someone'. 'my walking' seems incorrect; likely 'my work' or 'my schedule'. Parallel verb forms required: 'stay updated and avoid wasting time.' Suggestion: remove 'with' after 'contact', correct the noun, and use past participle 'updated' with 'stay'.

× When I want to hang out with my friend, I always sent e-mail.

✓ When I want to hang out with my friend, I always send an e-mail.

Again, 'sent' is past tense but the clause 'When I want' refers to habitual/future occurrences, so use present simple 'send'. Also use 'an e-mail'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions: 'I always send an e-mail.'

× it is a very easy way to contact with my friend and I can. Share the departure time or something?

✓ it is a very easy way to contact my friend and I can share the departure time or something.

'contact' should not take 'with'. Sentence punctuation/structure is broken by an unnecessary period and question mark. Combine clauses into one declarative sentence. Suggestion: remove 'with', fix punctuation, and make it one sentence: '...contact my friend, and I can share the departure time or something.'

× I'm not Chinese so I don't about about Chinese, but I guess the Chinese are.

✓ I'm not Chinese so I don't know much about Chinese people, but I guess Chinese people often send messages to their coworkers and friends.

Missing verb 'know'. Repeated word 'about about'. 'the Chinese are' is incomplete and uses definite article unnecessarily; better: 'Chinese people'. Also plural noun agreement and sentence completion needed. Suggestion: include 'know' and rephrase to 'Chinese people often send messages to their coworkers and friends.'

× Often sending a message for their coworker and friends.

✓ They often send messages to their coworkers and friends.

Incorrect gerund 'sending' and preposition 'for'. Use simple present 'send' for habitual action. Use preposition 'to' with 'send messages to someone'. Make subject explicit: 'They'. Suggestion: say 'They often send messages to their coworkers and friends.'

× I think you're sending e-mail will be more popular in the future.

✓ I think sending e-mail will be more popular in the future.

Incorrect pronoun 'you're' (you are) before noun phrase; it makes sentence ungrammatical. Omit 'you're' so the noun phrase 'sending e-mail' functions as subject. Suggestion: use 'I think sending e-mail...' or 'I think email will become more popular.'

× This is because with the development of the AI, it's become more easily to send the e-mail because it's a time consuming to call.

✓ This is because with the development of AI, it has become easier to send e-mails because calling is time-consuming.

Article and article usage errors: 'the AI' unnecessary—use 'AI' or 'artificial intelligence'. Verb form: 'it's become' should be 'it has become'. 'more easily' is an adverb; need adjective 'easier'. 'the e-mail' plural or no article: 'e-mails'. 'it's a time consuming to call' ungrammatical: use 'calling is time-consuming' or 'it takes time to call'. Suggestion: write 'it has become easier to send e-mails because calling is time-consuming.'