Emails— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且语句更简洁自然，避免重复。可以用一到两句说明习惯，并补充一个具体的原因或例子，使用连接词使句子更连贯。如注意语法（例如“take a phone”应为“take out my phone”），并删除重复词（如双写的“is”）。

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually use WeChat because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly send voice messages or short texts to friends without opening my laptop.

Gợi ý: 回答需结构清晰：先给出直接回答的主题句，然后用一两句具体说明何时会发邮件并举例。注意语法和词序，避免冗余和无意义词（如“toys”）。建议用更准确的词汇（e.g. “university email” “professors”）。

Ví dụ: I usually send emails to my professors for academic matters. For instance, I email them to submit assignments, ask detailed questions about coursework, or arrange meetings.

Gợi ý: 需要更流畅和具体的表达。先给出直接回答，然后用一两个具体的理由或例子支持。注意动词和名词的一致（e.g. “apps are”），并使用恰当的连接词（e.g. “because”）。避免模糊表达如“whatever or whenever”。

Ví dụ: Not really. Instant messaging apps such as WeChat are much more popular in China because they allow instant chats, group conversations and multimedia sharing. For example, many people use WeChat for both personal chats and work communication.

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并加入推断或预测的细节。先直接回答“less popular”，然后说明原因并给出一个具体的例子或可能的例外情形。修正表达细节（如“QQ”而非“QQQ”，并避免句末不完整的短语“It has more different kinds of.”）。

Ví dụ: I think email will become less popular. People prefer instant apps like WeChat or QQ for quick communication and media sharing; however, email will still be used for formal or official matters such as job applications or university notices.

× No, nowadays e-mail is not a very popular thing in our daily life.

✓ No, nowadays email is not very popular in our daily life.

句中“a very popular thing”使用不自然。英文中谈论某种通讯方式时常用不可数名词或直接用名词，不用“a ... thing”。建议改为“email is not very popular”或“sending emails is not very common”。

× I prefer to use WeChat to connect people because it is is very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to use WeChat to connect with people because it is very convenient for me.

缺少介词“with”导致动词短语不完整；另外有重复的“is is”。建议使用“connect with people”。

× You only need to take a phone and send sentence easily.

✓ You only need to take your phone and send a message easily.

原句结构混乱，“take a phone”应该为“take your phone”，“send sentence”应为“send a message”或“send sentences”。需补冠词并使用合适的名词。

× The study or task to my teacher on the university in the university e-mail is a more important connecting toys to connect your professors you If you have some question you can use.

✓ I use university email to send my assignments or questions to my teachers; it is an important way to contact my professors when I have questions.

原句语序混乱，词汇使用不当（例如“connecting toys”错误），并缺少标点。需要重组为清晰的主谓结构并使用正确词汇，如“send my assignments or questions”，“contact my professors”。

× No, in China the instant messaging apps like WeChat is more popular.

✓ No, in China instant messaging apps like WeChat are more popular.

主语为复数“apps”，谓语应使用复数形式“are”，这是主谓一致问题；另外“the”可省略。

× The apps like this is more convenient which can use when, whatever or whenever.

✓ Apps like this are more convenient because you can use them whenever you want.

原句中“apps”与动词“is”不一致，应为“are”；“which can use when, whatever or whenever”语法混乱，需改为“you can use them whenever you want”。

× For example are usually connect people use this.

✓ For example, people usually use these apps to connect with others.

原句缺主语和正确词序，应补“people”并使用“use these apps to connect with others”来表达习惯用法。

× That must be less popular because nowadays people prefer to use some instant messaging apps like WeChat or QQQ instead of the emails because they are more convenient to send message or watching videos.

✓ They will probably become less popular because nowadays people prefer instant messaging apps like WeChat or QQ instead of email, since they are more convenient for sending messages or watching videos.

原句中“That must be less popular”指代不明且时态与推测不自然，改为“will probably become less popular”更符合对未来的推测；“the emails”不需要定冠词，“send message”应为“sending messages”，“watching videos”并列时需要保持动名词形式一致。

× It has more different kinds of.

✓ They offer many different features.

原句不完整且代词指代不明。“It”应指代复数“apps”，应使用“they”；同时补全谓语和宾语，使用“offer many different features”。