Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời sắp xếp ý tưởng theo trình tự logic. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love drawing very much. I usually draw fashion designs or clothes because I enjoy creating new styles. Sometimes, I also draw sneakers or houses. I started learning to draw from my kindergarten teachers when I was a child.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, tên nghệ sĩ nên chính xác và câu nên rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love going to galleries because they have many beautiful paintings created by famous artists, such as Leonardo da Vinci and Vincent van Gogh. These paintings are very inspiring and full of emotion. Visiting galleries allows me to develop a unique style and learn more about history.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng theo trình tự hợp lý và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about art in the future. Currently, I am busy with school and homework, so I don't have much time. However, when I have free time, I plan to study how to create more beautiful and creative designs, which I really enjoy.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi sai như 'tortured' thay vì 'taught'. Hãy dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to draw when I was a kid in kindergarten. My teacher was very talented and taught us how to draw beautiful pictures, such as animals and houses. I remember designing fancy clothes based on her lessons, which made learning very enjoyable.

× I usually draw about fashion designs or clothes because I enjoy creative new style.

✓ I usually draw fashion designs or clothes because I enjoy creative new styles.

The phrase 'creative new style' is incorrect because 'style' should be plural to match the context of multiple designs. Also, 'creative new' should be reordered to 'new creative' or 'creative new' is acceptable but plural 'styles' is necessary here.

× Sometimes I usually draw sneaker livings or my houses when I was a child I learned to drawing from my teachers in kindergarten which.

✓ Sometimes I usually draw sneakers or my house. When I was a child, I learned to draw from my teachers in kindergarten.

The phrase 'sneaker livings' is incorrect; 'sneakers' is the correct plural noun. 'My houses' should be singular 'my house' if referring to one. 'Learned to drawing' is incorrect; it should be 'learned to draw'. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× Visited Gary's allows me to have unique style and learn more about history.

✓ Visiting galleries allows me to develop a unique style and learn more about history.

'Visited Gary's' is incorrect; it should be 'Visiting galleries'. Also, 'have unique style' is better expressed as 'develop a unique style'. The original sentence had incorrect noun and verb forms and unclear meaning.

× Recently I don't have much time because I have term time and I have many homeworks to do.

✓ Recently, I don't have much time because I have term time and I have much homework to do.

'Homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. 'Much homework' is the correct quantifier usage.

× So in the future when I don't have homework and I'm relaxed, I think that in the future I would learn more about how to have more beautiful design or creative design that I love.

✓ So in the future, when I don't have homework and I'm relaxed, I think that I will learn more about how to create more beautiful or creative designs that I love.

'Would learn' is incorrect for a future intention; 'will learn' is appropriate. 'How to have more beautiful design' is incorrect; it should be 'how to create more beautiful designs'. Also, 'design' should be plural to match the context.

× My teacher was very talented and tortured how to draw beautiful pictures like animals or our own houses, which make real lessons really enjoyable.

✓ My teacher was very talented and taught us how to draw beautiful pictures like animals or our own houses, which made the lessons really enjoyable.

'Tortured' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'taught'. 'Make' should be past tense 'made' to agree with the past context. Also, 'real lessons' is better as 'the lessons' for clarity.

× I I remember that when I was a kid I designed a fancy clothes that she taught.

✓ I remember that when I was a kid I designed fancy clothes that she taught me to make.

'A fancy clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The sentence also lacked clarity; adding 'me to make' clarifies the meaning.