Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like drawing?
Thí sinh
I love so much drawing even in my free time, I have made some models and display on my.
Giám khảo
Do you like to go to the gallery?
Thí sinh
Do you like to go to the gallery?
Giám khảo
Do you want to learn more about art?
Thí sinh
Yes, but I never have been going to gallery, but I would love. To visit the gallery.
Giám khảo
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Really found art lesson. An interesting. When I was a child because I love using colors and painting different things and.
Do you like drawing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,直接表达喜欢画画,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy drawing in my free time. I have created several models and displayed them at home.
Do you like to go to the gallery?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答没有回应考官的问题,重复了考官的问题。建议直接回答问题,并简要说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like going to galleries because I can see different kinds of art and get inspired.
Do you want to learn more about art?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子表达想学习更多艺术知识,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about art. Although I have never been to a gallery, I would love to visit one to see artworks in person.
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达小时候喜欢美术课的原因,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I found art lessons very interesting when I was a child because I loved using colors and painting different things.
× I love so much drawing even in my free time, I have made some models and display on my.
✓ I love drawing so much. Even in my free time, I have made some models and displayed them.
这里'drawing'是不可数名词,不能用复数形式。'display'应使用过去式'displayed',并且需要加上宾语'them'。建议调整句子结构,使表达更自然。
× I love so much drawing even in my free time, I have made some models and display on my.
✓ I love drawing so much. Even in my free time, I have made some models and displayed them.
'display on my'中的' on my'用法不正确,应该明确宾语,且动词时态需正确。
× Do you like to go to the gallery?
✓ Yes, I like to go to the gallery.
学生重复了考官的问题,缺乏回答。应根据问题给出完整回答。
× Yes, but I never have been going to gallery, but I would love. To visit the gallery.
✓ Yes, but I have never been to a gallery, though I would love to visit one.
'never have been going'时态错误,正确表达是现在完成时'have never been to'。'gallery'前应加不定冠词'a'。句子断裂,应合并为完整句子。
× Yes, but I never have been going to gallery, but I would love. To visit the gallery.
✓ Yes, but I have never been to a gallery, though I would love to visit one.
'going to gallery'中缺少冠词,且介词应为'to'。
× Really found art lesson. An interesting.
✓ I really found art lessons interesting.
原句结构不完整,缺少主语和谓语,且断句错误。应合并为完整句子。
× Really found art lesson. An interesting.
✓ I really found art lessons interesting.
'lesson'应使用复数形式'lessons',因为通常指多节课。
× Really found art lesson. An interesting.
✓ I really found art lessons interesting.
动词'found'使用正确,但句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。
× When I was a child because I love using colors and painting different things and.
✓ When I was a child, I loved using colors and painting different things.
描述过去的习惯应使用过去时'loved',而非现在时'love'。句子末尾不完整,应去掉多余的'and'。