Talents— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较简单，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。

Ví dụ: I am good at drawing and designing, which is why I chose product design as my major at university.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且信息重复。建议简洁明了地表达时间点和经历，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I developed this talent when I was a child because I enjoyed drawing on walls, and my parents supported me, so I have continued to practice it until now.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I believe drawing is closely connected to my future work because designing a perfect product requires careful sketches as an important step.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，信息组织混乱。建议简洁明了地描述家庭成员和他们的兴趣，注意时态和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, my six-year-old sister also loves drawing. I gave her some painting pens and a drawing book, and she really enjoys them.

× I'm good at drawing or design something.

✓ I'm good at drawing or designing something.

动词短语中，介词后面应使用动名词形式，因此'design'应改为'designing'。

× Because of that, I choose product design as my major in university.

✓ Because of that, I chose product design as my major in university.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式，'choose'应改为'chose'。

× To be honest, when I was a child I had a hobby is that I like to drawing on the wall, so my parents found that and they support me.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child, I had a hobby: I liked drawing on the wall, so my parents found out and supported me.

句子结构混乱，'I had a hobby is that'不正确，应改为'I had a hobby: I liked drawing'。另外，'like to drawing'应为'liked drawing'，动词时态和形式需调整。

× So now I didn't give up and use it.

✓ So now I haven't given up and still use it.

表达现在状态时，应使用现在完成时'haven't given up'，'use'前加副词'still'更自然。

× Work definitely, I think drawing is has a close connect with my future work, because if you want to design or make a perfect product, the important step is to draw the.

✓ Definitely work. I think drawing has a close connection with my future work, because if you want to design or make a perfect product, an important step is to draw it.

句子中多余的'is'应删除，'connect'应为名词'connection'，'draw the'不完整，应为'draw it'。

× Yes, that's my sister she were she is 6 years old and she loved drawing very much so I gave her I used painting pen or drawing book she was like very much.

✓ Yes, that's my sister. She is 6 years old and loves drawing very much, so I gave her painting pens and drawing books, which she likes very much.

句子中代词使用混乱，'she were she is'不正确，应为'she is'。另外，句子缺少标点，表达不清晰，需拆分并调整代词和时态。