Talents— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và không hoàn chỉnh, thiếu câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung thêm thông tin để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a talent for cooking. I enjoy experimenting with different recipes and flavors, which allows me to express my creativity in the kitchen.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu bị lặp lại. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I didn't master cooking when I was young because I found it difficult and not interesting. However, as I grew older and with my mother's guidance and technology, I found it easier and now I often cook to express my creativity.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời bổ sung thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Although I want to become a teacher in the future, I believe cooking is an essential skill. It will help me take care of my family, especially my children, by saving money and ensuring they eat healthy meals.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: My mother has the same talent for cooking and she taught me a lot. If she hadn't become a teacher, she would probably be a great cook. Thanks to her experience, I have learned many useful cooking skills.

× To be honest, I.

✓ To be honest, I do.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× As I mentioned before, when I was younger I didn't find it interesting and I find I find it too difficult because I I don't in next person who can cook well.

✓ As I mentioned before, when I was younger I didn't find it interesting and I found it too difficult because I didn't know anyone who could cook well.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and has repetition and missing words. 'Find' should be in past tense 'found' to match the past context. 'I don't in next person' is incorrect and should be 'I didn't know anyone'.

× But with the age of my mother and thanks to technology I find it easier and I can I usually cook for underwear and express myself creatively.

✓ But with my mother's age and thanks to technology, I find it easier and I usually cook for myself and express myself creatively.

The phrase 'age of my mother' is awkward; 'my mother's age' is better. 'I can I usually cook for underwear' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'I usually cook for myself'. Added commas for clarity.

× To be honest, in the future I want to become a teacher, but I think that a cooking is fundamental, fundamental needs for all people.

✓ To be honest, in the future I want to become a teacher, but I think that cooking is a fundamental need for all people.

The article 'a' before 'cooking' is incorrect because 'cooking' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'fundamental needs' should be singular 'fundamental need' to match the context.

× I think that when I get married, I can take care for my family and my especially my children because I can save money and ensure that they are healthy for all my family members.

✓ I think that when I get married, I can take care of my family, especially my children, because I can save money and ensure that they are healthy for all my family members.

The correct preposition after 'take care' is 'of', not 'for'. Also, the phrase 'my especially my children' is awkward; corrected to 'especially my children'.

× As I mentioned before, my mother spots me a lot in learning how to cook raw.

✓ As I mentioned before, my mother supports me a lot in learning how to cook.

The word 'spots' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'supports'. Also, 'cook raw' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'cook' alone suffices.

× I think that if he if she hadn't choose to become a teacher, she will be she would be a good cook.

✓ I think that if she hadn't chosen to become a teacher, she would be a good cook.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'he if she' and incorrect verb form 'choose' instead of past participle 'chosen'. Also, 'she will be she would be' is redundant; corrected to 'she would be'.

× I think that thanks to thanks to the age of of my mother, I can I know more information about cooking carefully.

✓ I think that thanks to my mother's age, I know more information about cooking carefully.

The phrase 'thanks to thanks to' and 'of of' are repeated unnecessarily. 'I can I know' is incorrect; corrected to 'I know'.