Talents— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Also, use past tense correctly and keep your sentences concise and clear. For example, say 'I took part in a traditional dance class when I was a child, and it was a great experience to show my dancing skills.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I am talented in Georgian traditional dances. When I was a child, I took part in a traditional dance class, and it was a great experience to showcase my skills, which people really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I still perform sometimes at restaurants or weddings, but I was more active when I was younger.'

Ví dụ: I still perform traditional dances occasionally at restaurants or weddings; however, I was more active and practiced more when I was younger.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictions. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, say 'I don't think my dancing talent will be useful for my future career because I am studying biology and plan to become a teacher.'

Ví dụ: I don't think my talent in traditional dance will be useful for my future career because I am studying biology and plan to become a teacher.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear, concise answer. For example, say 'My sister also attends dance classes and is quite good. However, we will see if she decides to become a professional dancer in the future.'

Ví dụ: My sister also attends dance classes and is quite good. However, we will see if she decides to become a professional dancer in the future.

× I, uh, take part in a traditional dances class and it was really good experience for me to, to show them how I can dance and they really like it.

✓ I, uh, took part in a traditional dance class and it was a really good experience for me to show them how I can dance and they really liked it.

The verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Also, 'dances' should be singular 'dance' because it refers to the class type. 'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to agree with the past event.

× I, uh, take part in a traditional dances class and it was really good experience for me to, to show them how I can dance and they really like it.

✓ I, uh, took part in a traditional dance class and it was a really good experience for me to show them how I can dance and they really liked it.

The phrase 'really good experience' needs the article 'a' before 'really good experience' because 'experience' is a countable noun here.

× Uh, it's happens recently also, but a few times when I'm going, uh, in the restaurant or someone's wedding, I always show them my talent of dance.

✓ Uh, it happens recently also, but a few times when I go to a restaurant or someone's wedding, I always show them my talent for dance.

The phrase 'it's happens' is incorrect; 'it' with 'happens' does not need 'is'. Also, 'I'm going' should be 'I go' to express habitual action. 'In the restaurant' should be 'to a restaurant' as the correct preposition. 'Talent of dance' should be 'talent for dance'.

× but a few times when I'm going, uh, in the restaurant or someone's wedding, I always show them my talent of dance.

✓ but a few times when I go to a restaurant or someone's wedding, I always show them my talent for dance.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place. Also, 'talent of dance' should be 'talent for dance'.

× Uh, but uh, I would say that each way, umm, when I was younger more.

✓ Uh, but uh, I would say that each time, umm, when I was younger, more.

The phrase 'each way' is incorrect; 'each time' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding a comma after 'younger' improves clarity.

× For my future work, I don't think so. It would be useful because now I'm studying at university and my major is English biology.

✓ For my future work, I don't think so. It wouldn't be useful because now I'm studying at university and my major is English biology.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used to express certainty about usefulness; 'wouldn't' is correct to express that the talent is not useful for future work.

× because when I, when I will get older, I will be become teachers.

✓ because when I get older, I will become a teacher.

In conditional clauses with 'when', the present tense 'get' is used instead of 'will get'. Also, 'will be become' is incorrect; 'will become' is correct. 'Teachers' should be singular 'a teacher'.

× Uh, I would say my sister, uh, because my sister is also going to dance classes and she's quite good at dance, but umm, we will see in the future if she choose to become dancer or not.

✓ Uh, I would say my sister, uh, because my sister is also going to dance classes and she's quite good at dance, but umm, we will see in the future if she chooses to become a dancer or not.

The verb 'choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'become dancer' needs the article 'a' before 'dancer'.