Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a specific talent. I'm still exploring different activities to find what I'm good at.
Giám khảo
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
Thí sinh
As I said I don't have a specific talent so I'm I'm not sure that was it mustard or not, but I like to learning new things and like photography and cooking. I try all I want to know that which one suits me.
Giám khảo
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I'm not sure because as I said, it's just on the way that I try to know which one suits me, but I really enjoy doing. I do these things.
Giám khảo
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
Thí sinh
Yes, in our family, my mom is talent in cooking.
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Be more specific and add a brief topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: I don't have a single outstanding talent yet; I'm still exploring different activities. For example, I enjoy photography and cooking, and I'm trying out courses and small projects to see which one I can develop further.
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence answering the timing question, then give specific examples and use linking words to clarify. Correct grammar (e.g., "mastered") and avoid hesitations and repetition.
Ví dụ: I haven't mastered any particular skill yet, so I can't say when it was learned. However, I recently started learning photography and cooking; for instance, I took an online photography class last month and I cook new recipes at the weekend to improve.
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a reasoned prediction with specific examples of how a skill might apply to work. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect cause and effect and reduce filler words.
Ví dụ: I'm not certain yet, because I'm still exploring, but some skills could be useful. For example, photography could help in a marketing role by creating visual content, and cooking could be useful if I work in hospitality or food media.
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and add one specific detail about your family member's ability to enrich the answer. Use linking words like "for example" to provide evidence.
Ví dụ: Yes. My mother is especially talented at cooking; for example, she often prepares traditional dishes from memory and teaches me recipes, which inspires me to practice my own cooking skills.
× No, I don't have a specific talent. I'm still exploring different activities to find what I'm good at.
✓ No, I don't have a specific talent. I'm still exploring different activities to find what I'm good at.
No change needed: sentence correctly uses present simple and present continuous to describe current state and ongoing action; grammar is correct.
× As I said I don't have a specific talent so I'm I'm not sure that was it mustard or not, but I like to learning new things and like photography and cooking.
✓ As I said, I don't have a specific talent, so I'm not sure whether it was developed recently or when I was young, but I like learning new things and I enjoy photography and cooking.
Multiple issues: 'I'm I'm' is repetition (editing error). 'that was it mustard' is incorrect vocabulary and word order; likely intended to ask whether the talent was developed recently or earlier — use 'whether it was developed recently or when I was young'. 'like to learning' mixes infinitive and -ing form; correct is 'like learning' or 'like to learn'. Also add commas for clarity and add 'I enjoy' for parallel structure. These corrections fit past/time reference and verb form rules.
× I try all I want to know that which one suits me.
✓ I try different things because I want to find out which one suits me.
Original has incorrect word order and missing articles; 'try all' is vague — use 'try different things'. 'I want to know that which one suits me' is awkward; correct phrasing is 'I want to find out which one suits me'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.
× Honestly, I'm not sure because as I said, it's just on the way that I try to know which one suits me, but I really enjoy doing. I do these things.
✓ Honestly, I'm not sure because, as I said, I'm still trying to find which one suits me, but I really enjoy doing these activities.
'It's just on the way that I try to know' is ungrammatical and awkward; better: 'I'm still trying to find which one suits me' using present continuous for ongoing process. 'I really enjoy doing' needs an object — 'these activities'. 'I do these things' is redundant; combine into one clear sentence.
× Yes, in our family, my mom is talent in cooking.
✓ Yes, in our family, my mom is talented at cooking.
'is talent' is incorrect because 'talent' is a noun; use adjective 'talented'. Preposition with 'talented' is 'at' for skills: 'talented at cooking'. Also keep commas optional; this correction fixes adjective usage and preposition choice.