Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes. I have a talent as it is. I can, I can sing very well, my voice very swift and every people who are listening me laugh to my voice.
Giám khảo
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
Thí sinh
Not anywhere, I don't go anywhere. I just try to improve my singing skills first return. Most of the time I try to singing like the start of music and sometimes I just singing in front of my family members.
Giám khảo
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately no because I working at the school and I'm a mess teacher but my talent is not helped me for my career. I just improve my talent because it's my hobby only hobby.
Giám khảo
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
Thí sinh
From my perspective, there are anyone who are to singing very well at my home. It's uh, only my talent and sometimes my sister would like to singing like me and sometimes I have him to singing.
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniqroq va tabiiyroq qilish uchun to‘g‘ri grammatikani qo‘llang va ortiqcha takrorlardan qoching. Boshlanishda qisqa mavzu gap (topic sentence) ayting: nima qila olishingizni aniq ifoda eting, so‘ng qo‘shimcha tafsilotlarni bering. Masalan, sekin va to‘g‘ri gapirib, "I can sing well" deb boshlang, keyin ovozingiz xususiyatini (tone, range) va qanday auditoriya uni yoqtirishini qisqacha tushuntiring. Qo‘shimcha ma’lumot berishda bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, often, usually) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: I can sing well. For example, I often perform at family gatherings and people usually enjoy my clear, high-pitched voice.
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Savolga to‘g‘ri va aniq javob bering — qachon o‘rganganingizni ayting (bolaligida yoki yaqinda). Grammatikani soddalashtiring va bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "I started singing when I was young" deb boshlang, keyin mashq qilishingiz haqida qisqacha ma’lumot bering, qaerda va kimga qarshi chiqishingizni ayting.
Ví dụ: I started singing when I was young. I usually practise at home by singing along to music, and sometimes I perform for my family to improve.
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq mavzuga bog‘lab, sababni tushuntiring. Grammatika va so‘z tartibini to‘g‘ri qiling (masalan, "I am a maths teacher"). Hobby va kasbiy imkoniyatlar o‘rtasidagi farqni tushuntiring va kelajakdagi imkoniyatlarni ayting. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalanib izoh bering (however, but, because).
Ví dụ: I don't think it will help my career because I am a maths teacher. However, I enjoy singing as a hobby and sometimes it helps me relax after work.
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Javobni sodda va aniq qilib, oiladagi boshqa odamlar haqida ma’lumot bering. Noto‘g‘ri gap tuzilmasini tuzating (masalan, "Nobody else in my family sings well"). Agar birov taqlid qilsa yoki qo‘shilib kuylasa, bu haqda misol keltiring. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (however, sometimes) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: Nobody else in my family sings very well. Sometimes my sister tries to sing like me, and we sing together at home for fun.
× I can, I can sing very well, my voice very swift and every people who are listening me laugh to my voice.
✓ I can sing very well; my voice is very clear and everyone who listens to me laughs at my voice.
Pronoun and verb forms were incorrect: 'every people' should be 'everyone'; 'who are listening me' should be 'who listen to me' (correct verb and preposition); 'laugh to my voice' should be 'laugh at my voice'. Also add 'is' for the adjective 'very clear' to describe the voice. Use simple present for habitual actions.
× Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
✓ Did you master it recently or when you were young?
Question formation was incorrect. Use auxiliary 'did' for past simple question and base verb 'master'. 'Was it mastered' is passive and awkward here; active form 'Did you master it' is correct for asking about who learned the skill.
× Not anywhere, I don't go anywhere.
✓ No, not really; I did not learn it anywhere specific.
The response used 'Not anywhere' twice and tense/confusion. Better to give a clear negative using 'no' and past tense 'did not learn' to match 'mastered' question. Avoid repetition and provide context.
× I just try to improve my singing skills first return.
✓ I just try to improve my singing skills first of all.
Phrase 'first return' is incorrect. Use 'first of all' to indicate priority. 'Try to improve' is correct; keep base verb after 'try to'.
× Most of the time I try to singing like the start of music and sometimes I just singing in front of my family members.
✓ Most of the time I try to sing from the start of a song, and sometimes I just sing in front of my family members.
'Try to' must be followed by base verb 'sing' not 'singing'. Also 'I just singing' needs auxiliary or base form: use 'I just sing'. Use 'from the start of a song' for clarity.
× Unfortunately no because I working at the school and I'm a mess teacher but my talent is not helped me for my career.
✓ Unfortunately no, because I work at a school and I am a mass teacher, but my talent does not help me in my career.
Use simple present 'I work' for current job. 'I working' is missing auxiliary. 'is not helped me' is incorrect passive/tense; use 'does not help me'. Use 'in my career' for correct preposition.
× I just improve my talent because it's my hobby only hobby.
✓ I just develop my talent because it is only my hobby.
Redundant 'hobby only hobby' corrected to 'only my hobby'. Use 'develop' or 'improve' with object 'my talent' and proper order 'only my hobby'.
× From my perspective, there are anyone who are to singing very well at my home.
✓ From my perspective, there is no one who sings very well at my home.
'There are anyone' is ungrammatical; use 'there is no one' for negation. 'Who are to singing' should be 'who sings' with simple present for habitual ability. Subject-verb agreement: 'no one' takes singular verb.
× It's uh, only my talent and sometimes my sister would like to singing like me and sometimes I have him to singing.
✓ It is only my talent, and sometimes my sister likes to sing like me; sometimes I ask her to sing.
'Would like to singing' should be 'likes to sing' or 'would like to sing' followed by base verb. 'I have him to singing' is wrong pronoun and structure; replace with 'I ask her to sing'. Also fix pronouns: sister -> her.