Computers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear but has some grammar and coherence issues. Try to start with a concise topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words. Correct articles and plural forms (e.g., 'a computer', 'PowerPoint presentations'), and avoid redundancy ("at the same time" + "because").

Ví dụ: I use a computer mainly for work. For example, I reply to emails and write reports for colleagues, and I prepare lesson materials such as PowerPoint presentations because it is more convenient than using a mobile phone.

Gợi ý: Good answer with a clear time reference, but fix tense consistency and article use. Use past tense throughout ("was" vs "is"). Be more specific with details (which tasks you did) and add a linking phrase to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: I first used a computer when I was in high school. It was an old model with a CRT monitor and a simple keyboard, and I learned basic tasks like typing and running simple programs, which was difficult because we had to follow manual instructions.

Gợi ý: Your idea is clear but sentences are fragmented and contain grammar errors. Combine short fragments into smooth sentences, use correct verb forms ("plays an important role") and give one or two concrete examples of how life would change.

Ví dụ: Life would be more difficult without computers because we rely on them for work, study, and daily tasks. For example, I would struggle to communicate with colleagues by email and access online learning resources.

Gợi ý: Clear points but improve phrasing and specificity. Use articles and correct collocations ("poor Internet connection", "when I am traveling"). Add a linking word and a brief example of the impact.

Ví dụ: I find it difficult to use a computer when there is a poor Internet connection because I cannot access online resources quickly. Also, when I am traveling I may lack power or secure networks, which makes working on a laptop hard.

× In my line of work, computer is very useful.

✓ In my line of work, a computer is very useful.

The noun 'computer' is singular and countable; it needs an article. Use 'a' for a general singular item. Suggestion: use 'a computer' or 'computers' depending on meaning.

× First of all, I use it to reply to emails or write reports to my colleagues, and at the same time I use it to prepare lessons because it's more convenient than my mobile phone.

✓ First of all, I use it to reply to emails, write reports to my colleagues, and prepare lessons because it is more convenient than my mobile phone.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions and awkward sequencing. Combine parallel verbs with commas and a final 'and' for clarity; expand contraction for formality. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and avoid repeating 'I use it'.

× For example, if I'm doing some PowerPoint presentations, I can easily browse.

✓ For example, if I am making PowerPoint presentations, I can easily browse for material.

'Doing some PowerPoint presentations' is informal and 'browse' needs an object. Use 'making' or 'giving' presentations and add 'for material' or 'for information' to complete the meaning.

× I remember the first time I used a computer is when I was in high school.

✓ I remember that the first time I used a computer was when I was in high school.

Reported memory refers to a past time; the clause should use past tense 'was' to match 'used'. Use 'that' to introduce the clause for clarity.

× It was an old version of computer with the basic monitor and keyboards.

✓ It was an old model of computer with a basic monitor and keyboard.

Use 'model' rather than 'version' for hardware; 'a computer' needs article and 'monitor and keyboard' should be singular unless multiple are implied. Use 'a basic monitor and keyboard'.

× It was actually difficult to learn computer at that time because you need to follow the instructions manually.

✓ It was actually difficult to learn computers at that time because you needed to follow the instructions manually.

Use past tense 'needed' to match 'was' and plural 'computers' or 'to use the computer'. 'Learn computer' is incorrect; use 'learn computers' or 'learn to use the computer'.

× It would definitely be a challenging life to live without a computer.

✓ Life would definitely be challenging without a computer.

Sentence is wordy and has awkward order. Simplify by placing subject 'Life' first and remove redundant words.

× Nowadays. It's mainly because people rely on technological advancement in terms of work or studies or even enter everyday life.

✓ Nowadays, it is mainly because people rely on technological advances for work, study, and everyday life.

Original has a sentence fragment 'Nowadays.' and unclear phrasing 'enter everyday life'. Combine into one sentence, fix fragment, use 'technological advances' and parallel nouns 'work, study, and everyday life'.

× Computer made an important role of communication and access.

✓ Computers play an important role in communication and access.

Verb tense and noun form are incorrect. Use plural 'Computers' and present tense 'play' for general truth; 'role in' is the correct preposition. Suggestion: 'Computers play an important role in communication and access to information.'

× I find it difficult to use computer when there is a poor Internet connectivity because more or less you will not be able to access the information that you need right away.

✓ I find it difficult to use a computer when there is poor Internet connectivity because you will not be able to access the information you need right away.

Use 'a computer' for a singular countable noun, remove 'a' before 'poor Internet connectivity' and delete 'more or less' which is informal and unnecessary. Also simplify 'that you need' to 'you need'.

× Aside from that, it's also difficult to use computer if you are traveling.

✓ Aside from that, it is also difficult to use a computer if you are traveling.

Again, 'a computer' is required for a singular countable noun; expand contraction for formality. Suggestion: could also say 'use computers' for general statement.