Swimming— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ звучит естественно, но можно сделать его более информативным и связным, добавив причину и личный опыт. Избегайте излишней эмоциональности без объяснения.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy swimming because it helps me stay fit and relax after a busy day. For example, I swim three times a week to improve my stamina and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Ответ ясен и логичен, но можно улучшить связность, используя связующие слова и более точные детали.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, learning to swim is not very difficult, especially if you have a good coach. For instance, with proper guidance, most people can swim confidently after just a few lessons.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова и структурировать ответ, чтобы он был понятен и логичен.

Ví dụ: Most people in my country prefer swimming in indoor pools because the weather is cold throughout the year, especially in cities like Saint Petersburg. Pools provide a comfortable environment to practice swimming regardless of the season.

Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать простые и понятные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: There are many differences between swimming in a pool and in the sea. For example, the sea has salt water and various sea animals, which makes swimming there a unique and exciting experience compared to the controlled environment of a pool.

× it is only one possibility to improve use We milk skills

✓ it is the only possibility to improve our swimming skills

The phrase 'improve use We milk skills' is incorrect due to wrong preposition and pronoun usage. It should be 'improve our swimming skills' to correctly express possession and the activity. Also, 'the only possibility' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Or it's a huge difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea takes women can receive for instance

✓ There is a huge difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea; for instance,

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks a clear subject and verb structure. Starting with 'There is' correctly introduces the difference, and 'for instance' is used to give examples. The phrase 'takes women can receive' is nonsensical and removed.

× it is salt water in the sea and a lot of fish and another sea animals

✓ there is salt water in the sea and a lot of fish and other sea animals

The phrase 'another sea animals' is incorrect; 'another' is singular and cannot modify plural 'animals'. The correct word is 'other'. Also, 'there is' is needed to indicate existence.

× it is unique experience for you to swimming in the sea

✓ it is a unique experience for you to swim in the sea

The verb after 'to' should be in base form, so 'to swimming' is incorrect; it should be 'to swim'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'unique experience'.