Swimming— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simple and direct. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I like swimming because it is my hobby. Whenever I have free time, I go to the swimming pool, which brings me a lot of joy."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like swimming because it is my hobby. Whenever I have free time, I go to the swimming pool, which brings me a lot of joy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with simple reasons. For example, "In my opinion, swimming is easy to learn because I practiced it with my parents when I was young, and I enjoy it a lot."

Ví dụ: In my opinion, swimming is easy to learn because I practiced it with my parents when I was young, and I enjoy it a lot.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, "People in my country like to swim in indoor and outdoor swimming pools. Some also swim in lakes or ponds. However, most prefer indoor pools because they are safer and more comfortable."

Ví dụ: People in my country like to swim in indoor and outdoor swimming pools. Some also swim in lakes or ponds. However, most prefer indoor pools because they are safer and more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is very unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly state the differences and reasons. For example, "Swimming in the pool is safer and more controlled, while swimming in the sea can be more exciting but also more dangerous because of waves and currents."

Ví dụ: Swimming in the pool is safer and more controlled, while swimming in the sea can be more exciting but also more dangerous because of waves and currents.

× Is definitely are using the swimming because it's my hobby now whenever I have free time I go to swimming pool which brings a lot of joy for my mind.

✓ I definitely enjoy swimming because it's my hobby now. Whenever I have free time, I go to the swimming pool which brings a lot of joy to my mind.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Is definitely are using the swimming' which is grammatically incorrect. The verb 'using' is wrongly applied here. The correct verb form is 'enjoy' to express liking an activity. Also, 'go to swimming pool' needs the definite article 'the' before 'swimming pool'. The phrase 'brings a lot of joy for my mind' is better expressed as 'brings a lot of joy to my mind'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Is definitely are using the swimming because it's my hobby now whenever I have free time I go to swimming pool which brings a lot of joy for my mind.

✓ I definitely enjoy swimming because it's my hobby now. Whenever I have free time, I go to the swimming pool which brings a lot of joy to my mind.

The preposition 'for' in 'brings a lot of joy for my mind' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' when expressing the recipient of joy or benefit. Also, 'go to swimming pool' requires the definite article 'the' before 'swimming pool' to specify the place.

× In my opinion swimming is very easy to learn. This is because it's my hobby so I can easy easily alarmed at to swimming from my parents and I can enjoy that when awhile Iowa I was swimming with my parents.

✓ In my opinion, swimming is very easy to learn. This is because it's my hobby, so I easily learned to swim from my parents and I enjoyed that when I was swimming with my parents a while ago.

The phrase 'I can easy easily alarmed at to swimming' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that the student learned to swim from their parents. The correct past tense verb 'learned' should be used. Also, 'I can enjoy that when awhile Iowa I was swimming' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'I enjoyed that when I was swimming with my parents a while ago' to correctly express past enjoyment and time.

× In my opinion swimming is very easy to learn. This is because it's my hobby so I can easy easily alarmed at to swimming from my parents and I can enjoy that when awhile Iowa I was swimming with my parents.

✓ In my opinion, swimming is very easy to learn. This is because it's my hobby, so I easily learned to swim from my parents and I enjoyed that when I was swimming with my parents a while ago.

The preposition 'at to' in 'alarmed at to swimming' is incorrect and unnecessary. The correct phrase is 'learned to swim' without extra prepositions. Also, 'when awhile Iowa' is incorrect; it should be 'a while ago' to indicate past time.

× To be honest in my country people I like to go swimming which is indoor swimming pool or outdoor swimming pool or an other opportunities such as lake, pond and so are so on.

✓ To be honest, in my country, people like to go swimming in indoor swimming pools, outdoor swimming pools, or other places such as lakes, ponds, and so on.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches. 'People I like' should be 'people like'. 'Indoor swimming pool' and 'outdoor swimming pool' should be pluralized as 'indoor swimming pools' and 'outdoor swimming pools' to match the plural subject 'people'. 'An other opportunities' is incorrect; it should be 'other places' or 'other opportunities'. Also, 'lake, pond' should be pluralized to 'lakes, ponds' to indicate multiple places.

× To be honest in my country people I like to go swimming which is indoor swimming pool or outdoor swimming pool or an other opportunities such as lake, pond and so are so on.

✓ To be honest, in my country, people like to go swimming in indoor swimming pools, outdoor swimming pools, or other places such as lakes, ponds, and so on.

The phrase 'go swimming which is indoor swimming pool' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' for places where swimming happens: 'go swimming in indoor swimming pools'. Also, 'and so are so on' is incorrect; it should be 'and so on' to indicate continuation.

× But most of them are there like go to swimming indoor becaused this is because certainly if there are there are.

✓ But most of them prefer to go swimming indoors because it is safer and more convenient.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronoun use and structure. 'Most of them are there like go to swimming indoor' is incorrect; it should be 'most of them prefer to go swimming indoors'. The phrase 'becaused this is because certainly if there are there are' is nonsensical and should be replaced with a clear reason such as 'because it is safer and more convenient'.

× I would say there are quite difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea because this is because most of the people like to swimming in the pool because they are a safe and have meant into housing around tub nada amaran ferment so people like to enjoy.

✓ I would say there is quite a difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea because most people like swimming in the pool as it is safe and has facilities around it, so people enjoy it.

The phrase 'there are quite difference' is incorrect; it should be 'there is quite a difference' because 'difference' is singular. 'Most of the people like to swimming' should be 'most people like swimming' to use the correct verb form. 'They are a safe' is incorrect; it should be 'it is safe' referring to the pool. The rest of the sentence contains unclear words and should be simplified to 'has facilities around it, so people enjoy it' for clarity and correctness.