Swimming— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary related to health benefits.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love swimming because it improves my physical fitness and strengthens my muscles. Moreover, it helps me relax and boosts my mental well-being.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to show contrast. Also, be more specific about your experience learning to swim.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, learning to swim was quite challenging. However, with regular practice, it became much easier over time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. Avoid vague or confusing statements.

Ví dụ: People in my country enjoy swimming in various places such as public pools, lakes, and beaches. Both young and older people like to swim for exercise and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat disorganized and repetitive. Use linking words to compare and contrast clearly, and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: Swimming in a pool is more controlled and enclosed, whereas swimming in the sea allows you to enjoy natural surroundings like sunshine, trees, and fresh air.

× I enjoy swimming because it brings benefits for your physical health.

✓ I enjoy swimming because it brings benefits to your physical health.

The correct preposition to use with 'benefits' in this context is 'to' rather than 'for'. 'Benefits to your physical health' is the standard expression.

× it strengthens my muscle tissues and also good for my mental health.

✓ it strengthens my muscle tissue and is also good for my mental health.

The word 'muscle tissue' is generally uncountable and used in singular form. Also, the sentence lacks a verb before 'good for my mental health'; adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× At the beginning, when I'm when I'm small, it's, it's difficult.

✓ At the beginning, when I was small, it was difficult.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was small'), so past tense 'was' should be used instead of present tense 'am'.

× It's for me, it's difficult to learn to swim.

✓ For me, it was difficult to learn to swim.

Since the context is about the past ('at the beginning'), past tense 'was' should be used instead of 'is'. Also, 'It's for me' is awkward; 'For me' is more natural.

× But when I but with, with practices and it's, it's easier and it's easier to swim.

✓ But with practice, it becomes easier to swim.

The phrase 'with practices' is incorrect; 'practice' is uncountable here. Also, the sentence is repetitive and awkward; simplifying improves clarity.

× I'm mostly old age category, like to go swimming younglings older, young and also older.

✓ Mostly, people in the older age category like to go swimming, as well as young people.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect plural forms and word order. 'Younglings' is uncommon; 'young people' is better. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Swimming in the pool you are like closed and you don't have access to see the nature but when you swimming see you see sun shining and also sun and nature trees and other things.

✓ When swimming in the pool, you are enclosed and don't have access to see nature, but when you swim in the sea, you can see the sun shining, trees, and other natural things.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Like closed' is incorrect; 'enclosed' is better. 'Access to see the nature' should be 'access to see nature'. Also, 'when you swimming see' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'when you swim in the sea'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.