Swimming— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like swimming?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I like swimming so much because it's very important to our body. We can improve our muscles, our body, our skills, so it's really important to swim.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
Thí sinh
Especially for me it were not difficult because I learned how to swim when I was 5I. Learn how to swim very fast.
Giám khảo
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
Thí sinh
I think in my country people like to swim in the rivers because we don't have too much seas or oceans in my country. So I think the most people swim in the lakes or in the rivers.
Giám khảo
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I think swimming in the pool is more difficult than swimming in the sea because in the sea there are there is salt water, so it can help you to swimming to swim.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you like swimming?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Ответ слишком общий и немного повторяется. Следует использовать более разнообразную лексику и конкретизировать, какие именно навыки и мышцы развиваются при плавании.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy swimming because it strengthens my muscles, improves cardiovascular health, and enhances my coordination skills.
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Нужно использовать правильные времена и более связные предложения.
Ví dụ: It was not difficult for me to learn swimming because I started when I was five years old and picked it up quickly.
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ответ повторяет информацию и содержит небольшие ошибки. Следует использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения.
Ví dụ: In my country, most people prefer swimming in rivers and lakes since we have limited access to seas or oceans.
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно улучшить структуру предложения и объяснить разницу более ясно.
Ví dụ: I believe swimming in the pool is more challenging because the water is fresh and requires more effort, whereas the salt water in the sea provides natural buoyancy, making it easier to float.
Ngữ pháp
× Especially for me it were not difficult because I learned how to swim when I was 5I.
✓ Especially for me it was not difficult because I learned how to swim when I was 5.
The verb 'were' is incorrect here because the subject 'it' is singular, so the past tense of 'to be' should be 'was'. Also, '5I' seems to be a typo and should be '5'.
× Learn how to swim very fast.
✓ I learned how to swim very fast.
The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. Adding 'I' as the subject and 'learned' as the past tense verb corrects the sentence structure.
× So I think the most people swim in the lakes or in the rivers.
✓ So I think most people swim in lakes or rivers.
The phrase 'the most people' is incorrect; 'most people' is the correct quantifier. Also, 'the lakes' and 'the rivers' are unnecessarily definite; plural nouns without 'the' are more appropriate here.
× because in the sea there are there is salt water, so it can help you to swimming to swim.
✓ because in the sea there is salt water, so it can help you to swim.
The phrase 'there are there is' is redundant; only 'there is' is needed for singular 'salt water'. Also, 'help you to swimming' is incorrect; the verb after 'help' should be in the base form 'to swim'.
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