Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Используйте простые и точные выражения, избегайте излишней формальности и ошибок в структуре предложения.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a close friend whom I've known since 5th grade. We met at school, and she is from Turkey. I really like her because she is kind and supportive.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более связным и логичным. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями и уточните детали, чтобы сделать ответ более конкретным.

Ví dụ: We usually spend time together by sharing our hobbies and interests. For example, we often go to the cave nearby and then attend extra English lessons to improve our skills.

Gợi ý: Избегайте повторений и используйте более разнообразную лексику. Сделайте ответ более естественным и плавным, используя связующие слова.

Ví dụ: We usually meet at school every day from 8:00 AM to 12:00 PM. We sit together in class and attend lessons side by side, which makes our day enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ более кратким и ясным, избегайте повторений и неуклюжих конструкций. Используйте простые и понятные выражения.

Ví dụ: I don't often go out with friends, but I usually spend time with my close friend who is very kind and always supports me when I have problems.

Gợi ý: Ответ не завершён и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь закончить мысль и использовать более точные выражения.

Ví dụ: Friends are very important to me because they influence my life positively. They provide support and help me grow as a person.

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Используйте более простые и чёткие предложения, избегайте негативных выражений.

Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with one close friend because I can trust and rely on them, rather than being with a group where I might not feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные грамматические формы и избегайте тавтологии. Сделайте ответ более естественным и плавным.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy inviting friends to my home. For example, I invited all my friends to my birthday party, and we had a lot of fun together.

Gợi ý: Ответ не завершён и содержит много пауз. Постарайтесь говорить более связно и закончить мысль.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a big difference. Last year, I met my friend at school, but now she lives in Turkey, so we only chat on WhatsApp instead of meeting in person.

Gợi ý: Ответ можно сделать более структурированным и использовать более разнообразную лексику. Избегайте повторений и пауз.

Ví dụ: Some places are suitable for meeting because they are interesting and comfortable. For example, teenagers often prefer online spaces because they find parks boring.

× Actually, of course, I have a friend who is with me since 5th grade.

✓ Actually, of course, I have a friend who has been with me since 5th grade.

The sentence describes an action that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'has been' is required instead of simple present 'is'.

× We met with her at school.

✓ We met her at school.

The verb 'meet' in this context does not require the preposition 'with'. 'Meet her' is correct when referring to the first encounter.

× She is the best girl whom I have ever met.

✓ She is the best girl that I have ever met.

In defining relative clauses, 'that' is preferred over 'whom' when referring to people as the object of the verb.

× We usually enjoy time spending our time together, especially when we share our hobbies and interests.

✓ We usually enjoy spending our time together, especially when we share our hobbies and interests.

The phrase 'enjoy time spending our time' is incorrect; 'enjoy spending our time' is the correct order and form.

× We usually do the same things like our daily routine is to go to cave and then to go to extra lessons to study English and to get ready for any kind of.

✓ We usually do the same things; our daily routine is to go to the cave and then to extra lessons to study English and get ready for any kind of exam.

The phrase 'like our daily routine is' is incorrect; it should be a statement separated by a semicolon or conjunction. Also, 'go to cave' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification.

× We usually meet each other at school every day since uh, 8:00 AM till 12:00 PM.

✓ We usually meet each other at school every day from 8:00 AM till 12:00 PM.

The preposition 'since' is used with a point in time, but here a time range is indicated, so 'from...till...' is correct.

× We like enjoying our day with her.

✓ We like enjoying our day together.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect here because the subject is plural 'we'; 'together' is more appropriate to express shared activity.

× I usually go out with the one that one girl whom I am talking about now.

✓ I usually go out with the one girl whom I am talking about now.

The phrase 'the one that one girl' is redundant; 'the one girl' is sufficient.

× She's really very kind and she supports me every time whenever I have troubles.

✓ She's really very kind and supports me every time I have troubles.

The phrase 'every time whenever' is redundant; 'every time' or 'whenever' alone is sufficient.

× Another factor to consider is that friends have a effect on you because they.

✓ Another factor to consider is that friends have an effect on you because they...

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'effect'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion.

× Nowadays, usually I prefer to spend time with one friend than with a group of friends, because spending time with a friend who always supports and to whom I can trust and believe my words is really very important than a group of fake friends who will just laugh in front of you and talk.

✓ Nowadays, I usually prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a group of friends, because spending time with a friend who always supports me and whom I can trust and believe is really more important than a group of fake friends who just laugh in front of you and talk.

The phrase 'prefer to spend time with one friend than' should be 'prefer ... rather than'. Also, 'to whom I can trust' should be 'whom I can trust'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correctness.

× For instance, I had a birthday where I I have invited all of my friends.

✓ For instance, I had a birthday where I invited all of my friends.

The past simple 'invited' is appropriate here to describe a completed action in the past, not present perfect 'have invited'.

× We enjoyed our day with having a pleasure.

✓ We enjoyed our day and had a great time.

The phrase 'with having a pleasure' is incorrect; 'had a great time' or 'enjoyed ourselves' is correct.

× Yes, there is a huge difference between where we met our friends, uh, last year and where we meet our friends, uh, nowadays because, uh, I had a friend who was from Turkey and now she's living in Turkey and so I can't see her anymore.

✓ Yes, there is a huge difference between where we met our friends last year and where we meet our friends nowadays because I had a friend who was from Turkey and now she lives in Turkey, so I can't see her anymore.

The verb 'meet' is correct in present tense for current action; 'she's living' is better as 'she lives' for habitual action. The sentence was corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× Nowadays, some places are very boring for, uh, teenagers and they prefer to go and to play in cyberspace than to go to park or to somewhere else because they consider it to be boring.

✓ Nowadays, some places are very boring for teenagers and they prefer to go and play in cyberspace rather than go to the park or somewhere else because they consider those places boring.

The phrase 'to go to park' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'prefer ... than' should be 'prefer ... rather than'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.