Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I have a friend who I have been with me 10 years old. We we shot many expansions together and we are very best friends.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do with your friends?
Thí sinh
We usually go out to try new food and and movie, which the movie and we do very interesting things. We are very happy together.
Giám khảo
Where do you often meet each other?
Thí sinh
We often meet at my home or her home. We often go to the park and we can meet in the park.
Giám khảo
Do you often go out with your friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I often go out with my friends. We often go to the park to enjoy the fuel and have a chat. In a residing environment we are very happy, we can do many activities together.
Giám khảo
How important are friends to you?
Thí sinh
Well, I think friends are important for me because they make me happy and help me a lot they can.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I prefer to spend the time with friends or with one friends or with a group of friends because they it's important for me and we can start the especially together and give some a bit of.
Giám khảo
Would you invite friends to your home?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like I invite friends to my home because my home have many funny games and weekend together weekend together play is very interesting and.
Giám khảo
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
Thí sinh
Yes, I see have a differences between the place we can meet at my home or her home or or the place past in the past complete the past.
Giám khảo
Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?
Thí sinh
I think some plates suitable because the place only two only two persons make me precisely, but I don't know.
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议加强时态和句子结构的练习,避免重复和拼写错误。可以用更自然的表达方式介绍朋友的关系和相识时间。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since I was 10 years old. We have shared many experiences together and have become very close friends.
What do you usually do with your friends?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不清晰,建议使用连词连接句子,丰富细节描述,避免语法错误。可以具体说明喜欢的活动和感受。
Ví dụ: We usually go out to try new foods and watch movies. We enjoy these activities because they are fun and help us relax together.
Where do you often meet each other?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答较简单且重复,建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,增加具体细节描述不同地点的特点。
Ví dụ: We often meet at my home or her home, and sometimes we go to the park because it's a nice place to chat and enjoy the fresh air.
Do you often go out with your friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误,表达不够自然。建议注意词汇的准确使用,句子结构清晰,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go out with my friends. We usually visit the park to enjoy the fresh air and have conversations. We feel happy spending time together and doing various activities.
How important are friends to you?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但句子结构不完整,建议使用更完整的句子和丰富的理由说明朋友的重要性。
Ví dụ: I think friends are very important to me because they bring happiness and support me whenever I need help.
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱且语法错误严重,建议先明确表达偏好,再用具体理由支持,避免重复和不完整句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because it is more lively and we can share different ideas and experiences together.
Would you invite friends to your home?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误多,建议用完整句子表达邀请朋友的原因,并具体说明家中活动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like inviting friends to my home because we have many fun games to play together, especially on weekends.
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重,建议先明确表达观点,再用具体例子说明现在和过去见面地点的不同。
Ví dụ: Yes, there is a difference. In the past, we usually met at school, but now we often meet at each other's homes.
Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,建议先明确观点,再用具体理由说明不同场所的适合性,避免重复和不确定表达。
Ví dụ: I think some places are suitable for meeting because they are quiet and comfortable, which makes it easier to talk and enjoy each other's company.
× I have a friend who I have been with me 10 years old.
✓ I have a friend who has been with me since I was 10 years old.
这里的错误是单复数和表达时间的方式不正确。'who I have been with me 10 years old'结构混乱,应该用'has been with me since I was 10 years old'来表达从10岁开始一直有这个朋友。
× We we shot many expansions together and we are very best friends.
✓ We have shared many experiences together and we are very best friends.
'shot many expansions'是错误的表达,应该是'have shared many experiences',这里涉及复数名词和动词搭配的错误。
× We usually go out to try new food and and movie, which the movie and we do very interesting things.
✓ We usually go out to try new food and watch movies, and we do very interesting things.
'movie'应为复数'movies',且动词搭配错误,应使用'watch movies'。
× We often go to the park and we can meet in the park.
✓ We often go to the park and meet there.
重复使用'park'显得冗余,且表达更简洁自然。
× We often go to the park to enjoy the fuel and have a chat.
✓ We often go to the park to enjoy the fresh air and have a chat.
'fuel'用错了,应该是'fresh air',表示享受空气。
× Well, I think friends are important for me because they make me happy and help me a lot they can.
✓ Well, I think friends are important to me because they make me happy and help me a lot.
句子中多余的'they can'应去掉,且'important for me'应改为'important to me'。
× I prefer to spend the time with friends or with one friends or with a group of friends because they it's important for me and we can start the especially together and give some a bit of.
✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends because it's important to me and we can enjoy time together.
'one friends'应为'one friend',句子结构混乱,需简化并调整表达。
× Yes, I like I invite friends to my home because my home have many funny games and weekend together weekend together play is very interesting and.
✓ Yes, I like to invite friends to my home because my home has many fun games and playing together on weekends is very interesting.
'my home have'应为'my home has','funny games'应为'fun games',句子结构需调整。
× Yes, I see have a differences between the place we can meet at my home or her home or or the place past in the past complete the past.
✓ Yes, I see there are differences between the places we can meet, like my home or her home, compared to the past.
'a differences'应为'differences',句子结构混乱,需调整。
× I think some plates suitable because the place only two only two persons make me precisely, but I don't know.
✓ I think some places are suitable because they are only for two persons, which suits me precisely, but I don't know.
'plates'应为'places',句子结构和表达不清晰,需调整。