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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Thí sinh

Of course she is my neighbor and we become friends 16 years ago. She's a very friendly people and we usually have a picnic together in the park.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do with your friends?

Thí sinh

We usually have picnics, play video games and watch TV together. That's makes us more enjoyable and relaxing.

Giám khảo

Where do you often meet each other?

Thí sinh

Wear label so we often meet each other in home. We usually watch TV and play video games together. That's a enjoyable and relaxing time.

Giám khảo

Do you often go out with your friends?

Thí sinh

Of course we are really like to go to the park and play badminton or have picnic together. That makes me reduce, that makes me reduce the pressure from.

Giám khảo

How important are friends to you?

Thí sinh

I think France just like my family, they complain with me and encourage me to try to some advan adventure that makes me very.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Thí sinh

I prefer to spend time with a group of friends we can check with others about our life and study. That makes me very relaxing and keeping the.

Giám khảo

Would you invite friends to your home?

Thí sinh

Of course, I really like inventing friends to my home. Uh, we can play video games and, uh, watching watch TV together this week me very relaxing and.

Giám khảo

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Thí sinh

Of course, in the past we met them and often talked about life, but now we usually talk about study and work.

Giám khảo

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Thí sinh

In my opinion, the reason why some place suitable for meeting is they are peaceful and quiet places.

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Part 1

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“she is my neighbor”应为“she is my neighbor,”,“we become friends 16 years ago”应为“we became friends 16 years ago”,且“friendly people”应为“friendly person”。建议注意时态一致性和单复数形式,同时回答应更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a friend who is my neighbor. We became friends 16 years ago, and she is a very friendly person. We often have picnics together in the park, which I really enjoy.

What do you usually do with your friends?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,且存在语法错误,如“That’s makes”应为“That makes”。建议丰富细节,使用连接词使表达更连贯,同时注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: We usually have picnics, play video games, and watch TV together. These activities help us relax and enjoy each other's company.

Where do you often meet each other?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有明显的语法和词汇错误,如“Wear label”无意义,应改为“Because we live nearby”,且“in home”应为“at home”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子结构,避免错误影响表达。

Ví dụ: Because we live nearby, we often meet at home. We usually watch TV and play video games together, which is always enjoyable and relaxing.

Do you often go out with your friends?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“we are really like”应为“we really like”,且句子不完整,表达不清。建议练习完整句子表达,注意语法和句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: Of course, we really like going to the park to play badminton or have picnics together. These activities help me reduce stress and feel refreshed.

How important are friends to you?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇错误严重,如“France”应为“friends”,“complain with me”应为“share with me”,且句子不完整。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性,表达清晰思想。

Ví dụ: I think friends are like my family. They share their feelings with me and encourage me to try new adventures, which makes me very happy.

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,如“check with others”不合适,应为“chat with others”,且最后一句不完整。建议注意句子完整性和用词准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because we can chat about our lives and studies. This makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Would you invite friends to your home?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处错误,如“inventing”应为“inviting”,“watching watch TV”重复且不正确,句子不完整。建议练习正确动词形式和句子结构,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Of course, I really like inviting friends to my home. We can play video games and watch TV together, which makes me feel very relaxed.

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以使用连接词使表达更连贯,如“where we used to meet them”应更具体。建议丰富细节,使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a difference. In the past, we met in casual places and often talked about life, but now we usually meet in libraries or cafes and talk about study and work.

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但语法有误,如“some place”应为“some places”,且句子结构简单。建议使用复合句和更多细节。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some places are suitable for meeting because they are peaceful and quiet, which allows us to talk comfortably without distractions.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Of course she is my neighbor and we become friends 16 years ago.

Of course she is my neighbor and we became friends 16 years ago.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作,应该使用过去时态become的过去式became。

Singular and plural issue

× She's a very friendly people and we usually have a picnic together in the park.

She's a very friendly person and we usually have a picnic together in the park.

people是复数形式,前面用的是单数she's,应该用单数person来匹配。

Third person singular issue

× That's makes us more enjoyable and relaxing.

That makes us more enjoyable and relaxed.

主语是单数that,谓语动词makes不需要加s,且形容词relaxing应改为形容人的形容词relaxed。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Wear label so we often meet each other in home.

We live nearby, so we often meet each other at home.

原句中'wear label'无意义,应为'we live nearby';'in home'应改为'at home',表示在家。

Incorrect use of articles

× That's a enjoyable and relaxing time.

That's an enjoyable and relaxing time.

enjoyable以元音音素开头,前面的不定冠词应使用an。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Of course we are really like to go to the park and play badminton or have picnic together.

Of course we really like to go to the park and play badminton or have a picnic together.

'are really like'结构错误,应为'really like';'have picnic'缺少冠词'a'。

Sentence structure errors

× That makes me reduce, that makes me reduce the pressure from.

That helps me reduce the pressure.

句子结构混乱,重复且不完整,改为简洁完整的表达。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think France just like my family, they complain with me and encourage me to try to some advan adventure that makes me very.

I think friends are just like my family; they complain with me and encourage me to try some adventurous things that make me very happy.

'France'应为'friends';'try to some advan adventure'结构错误,应为'try some adventurous things';句尾不完整,补充完整表达。

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer to spend time with a group of friends we can check with others about our life and study.

I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because we can share with others about our life and study.

两个句子缺少连接词,导致句子结构错误,添加because使句子完整。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× That makes me very relaxing and keeping the.

That makes me feel very relaxed and keeps me happy.

'makes me very relaxing'错误,应该是'makes me feel relaxed';'keeping the'不完整,补充完整表达。

Incorrect use of verbs

× Of course, I really like inventing friends to my home.

Of course, I really like inviting friends to my home.

动词'inventing'用错,应为'inviting',表示邀请。

Incorrect use of verbs

× Uh, we can play video games and, uh, watching watch TV together this week me very relaxing and.

Uh, we can play video games and watch TV together; this makes me feel very relaxed.

'watching watch'重复且错误,应为'watch';句子不完整,补充完整表达。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Of course, in the past we met them and often talked about life, but now we usually talk about study and work.

Of course, in the past we met them and often talked about life, but now we usually talk about studies and work.

'talk about study'应为复数形式'studies',表示学习相关内容。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× In my opinion, the reason why some place suitable for meeting is they are peaceful and quiet places.

In my opinion, the reason why some places are suitable for meeting is that they are peaceful and quiet places.

'some place'应为复数'some places';缺少动词'are';连接词缺失,补充'that'使句子完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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