Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to give a complete, coherent sentence directly answering the question, and add specific details about the types of websites you visit related to your studies. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I often visit educational websites related to medicine because I am studying in the medical field. For example, I use online medical journals and research databases to support my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and explain why you like the website. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: My favourite website is a03, which is a platform where I can read many online novels. I enjoy it because it offers a wide variety of stories that I find interesting and entertaining.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and provide reasons for your opinion.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think the websites I visit have changed much because they are already very good. I can't imagine how they could be improved further.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some unclear words and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct vocabulary and complete sentences to explain the website's function clearly.

Ví dụ: In Thailand, a popular website is Pantip. It is a forum where people can ask questions and other users reply with answers and opinions.

× Well, I'll find visit many kinds of websites.

✓ Well, I often visit many kinds of websites.

The phrase 'I'll find visit' is incorrect because 'find' is not used correctly here and 'visit' should be in the base form after 'will'. The student likely meant to say 'I often visit' to express habitual action in the present tense.

× During the school days, I will. Entered those websites.

✓ During the school days, I visited those websites.

The sentence is fragmented and 'Entered' is incorrectly capitalized and used. The correct past tense verb 'visited' should be used to indicate past habitual action during school days.

× About the. Medically because I study in a medical field and.

✓ About medical topics because I study in a medical field.

The phrase 'About the. Medically' is incorrect and fragmented. 'About medical topics' is a clearer and grammatically correct phrase. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× As I mentioned earlier, I'm really fond of. Reading novels online, so one of my favorite websites is.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I'm really fond of reading novels online, so one of my favorite websites is.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods breaking the flow. Removing the periods creates a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× It's called a 03.

✓ It's called AO3.

The phrase 'a 03' is incorrect; the website name is 'AO3' (Archive of Our Own). Using the correct proper noun is important for clarity.

× It's a platform where you can. Search for lots of. Novo Stan Stories.

✓ It's a platform where you can search for lots of novel stories.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods and 'Novo Stan Stories' is a misspelling of 'novel stories'. Correcting the spelling and sentence structure improves clarity.

× Not really, because I think what? It is not is quite perfect and I cannot even imagine how it will upgrade to be even better than now.

✓ Not really, because I think it is quite perfect and I cannot even imagine how it will be upgraded to be even better than now.

The sentence contains unnecessary words ('what?') and incorrect verb forms ('is not is'). Also, 'upgrade' should be in passive form 'be upgraded' to fit the context.

× In Thailand there is a website called Pantip.

✓ In Thailand, there is a website called Pantip.

A comma is needed after 'In Thailand' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause.

× It's a site where people can type their questions. Anne, there will be other users replying to your. Christians and to express their opinions about what they think about what you ask.

✓ It's a site where people can type their questions, and other users will reply to your questions and express their opinions about what you ask.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors such as 'Anne' instead of 'and', 'Christians' instead of 'questions'. Correcting these and combining the fragments creates a coherent sentence.