Part 1
Giám khảo
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Thí sinh
For me, the most challenging curriculum at school is mathematics because I find it difficult to to perform calculations and understand complex equations. For example, topics like algebra and geometry's often confuse me an I sometimes get struggled to keep up with a lessons.
Giám khảo
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Thí sinh
I too like to challenge myself, especially on the things I felt interesting an entertainment. Because for me, when I'm get interested into something, it's it's definitely a motivation for me to push myself to make it happen.
Giám khảo
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Thí sinh
Uhm yes, I Chu likes you facing up with challenges. Especially when it comes to a multi aspects from all kinds of challenges. For example, I'd like to challenge myself on making music and singing's an making myself to learn a new language is.
Giám khảo
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Thí sinh
Uhm. For me, on when every challenge is coming up to my face is. Uhm, I would definitely use my own ways to solve the problem. So for example when there's an extremely difficult challenges that I can't reach it in the short time, then I'll be separated into different parts to complete it.
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词,如“to to perform”和“geometry's”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I find mathematics the most challenging subject at school because I struggle with calculations and complex equations. For instance, topics like algebra and geometry often confuse me, and I sometimes find it hard to keep up with the lessons.
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,如“it's it's”,且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,注意时态和冠词的使用,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like to challenge myself, especially when I find something interesting or entertaining. When I am interested in something, it motivates me to work hard and achieve my goals.
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有发音错误和语法混乱,句子不连贯。建议练习发音,使用简单清晰的句子表达观点,并使用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy facing challenges in life. For example, I like to challenge myself by making music, singing, and learning new languages.
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用更简洁的句子,明确说明解决问题的方法,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: When I face challenges, I try to solve them in my own way. For example, if a task is too difficult to finish quickly, I break it into smaller parts and complete each part step by step.
× For me, the most challenging curriculum at school is mathematics because I find it difficult to to perform calculations and understand complex equations.
✓ For me, the most challenging subject at school is mathematics because I find it difficult to perform calculations and understand complex equations.
这里“curriculum”指的是课程体系,通常用作整体名词,不适合用来表示单一学科。应使用“subject”表示“学科”,符合语境。
× For example, topics like algebra and geometry's often confuse me an I sometimes get struggled to keep up with a lessons.
✓ For example, topics like algebra and geometry often confuse me and I sometimes struggle to keep up with lessons.
“geometry's”错误地使用了所有格,应为复数形式“geometry”。“get struggled”错误,动词“struggle”不需要“get”辅助。冠词“a lessons”错误,复数名词“lessons”不加冠词。
× For example, topics like algebra and geometry's often confuse me an I sometimes get struggled to keep up with a lessons.
✓ For example, topics like algebra and geometry often confuse me and I sometimes struggle to keep up with lessons.
“an”应为连词“and”,连接两个并列句子。
× I too like to challenge myself, especially on the things I felt interesting an entertainment.
✓ I also like to challenge myself, especially with things I find interesting and entertaining.
“especially on the things”中介词“on”用法不当,应改为“with”。“felt interesting an entertainment”时态和词性错误,应为“find interesting and entertaining”。
× I too like to challenge myself, especially on the things I felt interesting an entertainment.
✓ I also like to challenge myself, especially with things I find interesting and entertaining.
“felt”是过去式,但句子表达的是一般现在时的习惯,应使用现在时“find”。
× Because for me, when I'm get interested into something, it's it's definitely a motivation for me to push myself to make it happen.
✓ Because for me, when I get interested in something, it's definitely a motivation for me to push myself to make it happen.
“I'm get”语法错误,应为“I get”。“interested into”介词用法错误,应为“interested in”。重复“it's it's”应去掉一个。
× Uhm yes, I Chu likes you facing up with challenges.
✓ Uhm yes, I like facing up to challenges.
“I Chu likes you”语序和人称错误,应为“I like”。“facing up with”介词搭配错误,应为“facing up to”。
× Especially when it comes to a multi aspects from all kinds of challenges.
✓ Especially when it comes to multiple aspects from all kinds of challenges.
“a multi aspects”中“a”与复数名词“aspects”不匹配,应改为“multiple aspects”。
× For example, I'd like to challenge myself on making music and singing's an making myself to learn a new language is.
✓ For example, I'd like to challenge myself by making music and singing, and by learning a new language.
“singing's an making myself to learn a new language is”结构混乱,错误使用所有格和冠词,应改为并列结构“singing, and by learning a new language”。
× Uhm. For me, on when every challenge is coming up to my face is.
✓ Uhm. For me, whenever a challenge comes up in front of me,
句子结构混乱,“on when every challenge is coming up to my face is”不符合英语表达习惯,应改为“whenever a challenge comes up in front of me”。
× So for example when there's an extremely difficult challenges that I can't reach it in the short time, then I'll be separated into different parts to complete it.
✓ So for example, when there are extremely difficult challenges that I can't complete in a short time, I break them into different parts to complete.
“an extremely difficult challenges”冠词与复数不匹配,应去掉“an”或改为单数。动词“reach”用法不当,应为“complete”。“I'll be separated”被动语态错误,应为主动“我把任务分成不同部分”。