Part 1
Giám khảo
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Thí sinh
When I was at school, I think the most challenges subject is months. Be 'cause 8 and needs you to remember so many formulas and also it needs your brains to guide creativity. To make your own way to solve the problem.
Giám khảo
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to challenge myself. Although it is very difficult for me to get out of my own comfortable zone. I think it is meaningful for me too. Take something you and even something challenges. It can create if my.
Giám khảo
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to. Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges. Everyone only has one lifetime, so I think we need to hold down this opportunity to do something meaningful for us. So I think do something challenges is good for our health.
Giám khảo
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Thí sinh
If I meet challenges in my daily life, I will do it step by step. If there are. More than two challenges come together with me. I will. Solvay's 1 by 1. After solving 1 crop challenges to another.
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,导致意思难以理解。建议你在回答时注意语法的正确性,使用完整的句子,并且明确表达你的观点。例如,先直接回答问题,然后用具体细节支持你的观点。
Ví dụ: I think mathematics is the most challenging subject at school because it requires memorizing many formulas and applying creative thinking to solve problems in different ways.
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够连贯,句子结构混乱,部分内容难以理解。建议你在回答时使用连贯的句子,避免断句错误,并且用具体例子或理由来支持你的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me grow. Although it is hard to leave my comfort zone, I believe facing challenges is meaningful and helps me improve.
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和用词不当,影响了表达效果。建议你注意句子结构,使用正确的词汇,并且用更具体的理由支持你的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy living a life full of challenges because we only have one life, and facing challenges allows us to achieve meaningful goals and stay mentally healthy.
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有很多断句和拼写错误,导致表达不清晰。建议你练习使用完整且连贯的句子,清楚地描述你的处理方法,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: When I face challenges in daily life, I deal with them step by step. If I have more than one challenge at the same time, I solve them one by one, finishing one before moving to the next.
× I think the most challenges subject is months.
✓ I think the most challenging subject is math.
这里'subject'是单数,'challenges'应为形容词形式'challenging'来修饰'subject',且'months'应为'math'(数学),符合语境。
× Be 'cause 8 and needs you to remember so many formulas and also it needs your brains to guide creativity.
✓ Because it needs you to remember so many formulas and also requires your brain to guide creativity.
'Be 'cause'应为'Because',且句子结构不完整,需调整使其成为完整句子。'needs you'改为'requires you'更正式,'brains'改为'singular brain'更合适。
× To make your own way to solve the problem.
✓ You need to find your own way to solve the problem.
该句为不完整句,应补充主语和谓语,使句子完整。
× Take something you and even something challenges.
✓ Take on something challenging for you and even more challenges.
'something challenges'应为' something challenging',形容词形式修饰名词。
× It can create if my.
✓ It can create opportunities for me.
原句不完整且无意义,需补充完整表达。
× So I think do something challenges is good for our health.
✓ So I think doing something challenging is good for our health.
'do something challenges'中'challenges'应为形容词形式'challenging',且动词形式应为动名词'doing'。
× If there are. More than two challenges come together with me.
✓ If more than two challenges come to me at the same time,
句子断裂且结构不完整,需合并并调整语序使其通顺。
× I will. Solvay's 1 by 1.
✓ I will solve them one by one.
'Solvay's'拼写错误,应为'solve',且'1 by 1'应为'one by one','them'作为宾语更合适。
× After solving 1 crop challenges to another.
✓ After solving one challenge, I will move on to another.
原句不完整且'crop challenges'用词错误,应为'challenge',并补充完整句子结构。