Challenges— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to be more specific about the subject you find challenging and avoid repeating phrases. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and keep your sentences concise. For example, instead of saying 'my subject' repeatedly, name the subject directly and explain why it is difficult with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I find mathematics the most challenging subject at school because it involves many complex formulas. Many students, including myself, struggle to understand these formulas, which makes solving problems difficult. Therefore, it requires extra practice and focus to master.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your ideas flow better. Avoid vague phrases like 'outstanding exercise' and explain why you enjoy challenging yourself with specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself, especially with difficult math exercises. These problems are tough and not easy for most students, but I like to push myself to find the correct solutions. This helps me improve my skills and gain confidence.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but can be clearer and more organized. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to connect your points logically. Also, try to avoid grammatical errors and be more specific about how challenges help you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like living a life full of challenges because they help me learn new things and boost my confidence. For example, facing difficulties teaches me to stay strong and believe in myself, which prepares me for future situations.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid unclear phrases like 'try to hesitate about the problem.' Instead, explain your method step by step with linking words to show the process logically. Use specific vocabulary to describe how you approach challenges.

Ví dụ: When I face challenges, I deal with them step by step. First, I try to understand the problem clearly. Then, I analyze each part carefully to find the best solution. This method helps me solve problems effectively.

× The subject that I think it is the most difficult and challenging at school would be my subject because I think my subject is a difficult subject that many student could not understand it properly.

✓ The subject that I think is the most difficult and challenging at school would be my subject because I think my subject is a difficult subject that many students could not understand properly.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'that I think' and should be omitted. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many'. Remove 'it' after 'understand' because the object is already clear.

× The subject that I think it is the most difficult and challenging at school would be my subject because I think my subject is a difficult subject that many student could not understand it properly.

✓ The subject that I think is the most difficult and challenging at school would be my subject because I think my subject is a difficult subject that many students could not understand properly.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to 'many' students, which is plural.

× Also it has so many formula that can make the student confuse and the student cannot learn it correctly so they cannot solve the problem easily.

✓ Also, it has so many formulas that can confuse the students and the students cannot learn correctly, so they cannot solve the problems easily.

'Formula' should be plural 'formulas' to match 'so many'. 'Make the student confuse' is incorrect; it should be 'confuse the students'. 'Learn it correctly' is better as 'learn correctly' because the object is unclear. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'they'.

× Also it has so many formula that can make the student confuse and the student cannot learn it correctly so they cannot solve the problem easily.

✓ Also, it has so many formulas that can confuse the students and the students cannot learn correctly, so they cannot solve the problems easily.

'So many' requires a plural noun, so 'formula' should be 'formulas'.

× Also it has so many formula that can make the student confuse and the student cannot learn it correctly so they cannot solve the problem easily.

✓ Also, it has so many formulas that can confuse the students and the students cannot learn correctly, so they cannot solve the problems easily.

'The student' should be plural 'the students' to refer to multiple learners. Also, 'confuse' is a verb and should not be used as an adjective here.

× Also it has so many formula that can make the student confuse and the student cannot learn it correctly so they cannot solve the problem easily.

✓ Also, it has so many formulas that can confuse the students and the students cannot learn correctly, so they cannot solve the problems easily.

'It' after 'learn' is unnecessary because the object is implied; removing it improves clarity.

× Yes, I definitely prefer to challenge myself in a difficult situation.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer to challenge myself in difficult situations.

'A difficult situation' is singular but the context suggests general situations, so plural 'difficult situations' is more appropriate.

× For example, I like to challenge myself in doing math exercise.

✓ For example, I like to challenge myself by doing math exercises.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, 'in doing' is better replaced with 'by doing' for correct preposition use.

× For example, I like to challenge myself in doing math exercise.

✓ For example, I like to challenge myself by doing math exercises.

'Challenge myself in doing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the method of challenging oneself.

× I would say it is an outstanding exercise because it is not for the normal student.

✓ I would say it is an outstanding exercise because it is not for the average student.

'Normal' is not the best adjective here; 'average' is more appropriate to describe typical students.

× I would say it is an outstanding exercise because it is not for the normal student.

✓ I would say it is an outstanding exercise because it is not for the average students.

If referring to a group, 'students' plural is better; however, singular 'student' can be used if referring to a typical individual. Context suggests plural is better.

× But I challenge myself to find a solution, like to do that exercise correctly.

✓ But I challenge myself to find a solution, like doing that exercise correctly.

'Like to do' is less natural here; 'like doing' is better to express preference or example.

× Yes, I like to live in a life that has a lot of challenges because challenges have allowed me to learn something new, like it can boost my confidence and help me to know what are going to happen.

✓ Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges because challenges have allowed me to learn something new, like boosting my confidence and helping me to know what is going to happen.

'Live in a life' is incorrect; 'live a life' is correct. 'Like it can boost' is awkward; better to use gerunds 'like boosting' and 'helping'. 'What are going to happen' should be 'what is going to happen' for subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I like to live in a life that has a lot of challenges because challenges have allowed me to learn something new, like it can boost my confidence and help me to know what are going to happen.

✓ Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges because challenges have allowed me to learn something new, like boosting my confidence and helping me to know what is going to happen.

'Live in a life' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' should be omitted.

× like it can boost my confidence and help me to know what are going to happen.

✓ like boosting my confidence and helping me to know what is going to happen.

'What are going to happen' is incorrect; 'what' is singular here, so the verb should be 'is'.

× So challenging can be a problem, but it's also the solution for my lifetime that can help me to stay strong and believe myself.

✓ So challenges can be a problem, but they're also the solution for my life that can help me stay strong and believe in myself.

'Challenging' is a verb form; the noun 'challenges' is correct here. 'Believe myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'believe in myself'.

× Well, there are so many tips that I used to deal with challenges in my daily life, but one I used to use it is thinking step by step.

✓ Well, there are so many tips that I use to deal with challenges in my daily life, but one I use is thinking step by step.

'Used to' implies past habit; if referring to current practice, 'use' is correct. Also, 'one I used to use it' is redundant; 'one I use' is sufficient.

× I mean we try to hesitate about the problem and understand it clearly.

✓ I mean we try not to hesitate about the problem and understand it clearly.

'Try to hesitate' is incorrect because 'hesitate' means to pause; the intended meaning is likely 'try not to hesitate' or 'try to think carefully'.

× Like we have to know each properly so we can find a solution.

✓ Like we have to understand each part properly so we can find a solution.

'Know each' is incomplete; it should specify 'each part' or 'each step' to clarify the object.