Challenges— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to use correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I found mathematics and physics the most challenging subjects at school because they involved complex concepts and lots of calculations. For example, memorising formulas and solving problems required a lot of practice, which was difficult at my age.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases. Keep your answer within 5 sentences and make it natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me develop new skills. For instance, facing challenges improves my problem-solving abilities and prepares me for unexpected situations. This makes me more confident and resilient.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Avoid repeating the same ideas and try to organise your response logically. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons or examples. Also, correct grammatical mistakes and complete your sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I prefer a life with fewer challenges because too many difficulties can cause stress and disappointment. For example, when people face constant problems, they might feel overwhelmed and lose motivation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good structure and some linking words. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and provide more specific examples. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: When I face challenges, I stay calm and patient because stress can cloud my judgment. I carefully analyse the situation from different angles, and if I lack information, I don't hesitate to ask others for help. This approach usually helps me find effective solutions.

× The content of this subject were too difficult on that age.

✓ The content of this subject was too difficult at that age.

The subject 'content' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to age.

× We had to memorize them lots of numbers and also calculate lots of thing and they had a specific content and we couldn't.

✓ We had to memorize lots of numbers and also calculate lots of things, and they had specific content that we couldn't understand.

'Lots of thing' should be 'lots of things' to match plural form. 'Them' is incorrectly used before 'lots of numbers'. Also, the sentence was unclear and needed restructuring for clarity.

× The concept of this content we couldn't learn.

✓ We couldn't learn the concept of this content.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. The subject should come before the verb for clarity.

× For instance, when we have a challenge in our life, we can learn problem solving the skills and also it's prepared us for unexpected events and we will be strong to do them.

✓ For instance, when we have a challenge in our life, we can learn problem-solving skills, and it prepares us for unexpected events so that we will be strong enough to face them.

'Problem solving the skills' is incorrect; it should be 'problem-solving skills'. 'It's prepared us' is incorrect; 'it prepares us' fits present tense. 'Strong to do them' should be 'strong enough to face them' for correct expression.

× And the other thing that I like to mention is that.

✓ Another thing that I would like to mention is that...

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. It needs to be completed or rephrased for clarity.

× No, lots of challenges always combined with lots of troubles and failures because people get unnecessary stress and they cannot control the situation.

✓ No, lots of challenges are always combined with lots of troubles and failures because people get unnecessary stress and they cannot control the situation.

The verb 'combined' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice correctly.

× They cannot consider different aspect.

✓ They cannot consider different aspects.

'Aspect' should be plural 'aspects' to match 'different' which implies more than one.

× Lots of challenges and they may have failure and they get disappointed.

✓ With lots of challenges, people may experience failure and get disappointed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to form a complete and clear sentence.

× Actually, sometimes they get depressed because of this.

✓ Actually, sometimes they get depressed because of this.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Lots of challenges they.

✓ They face lots of challenges.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. It needs to be completed to make sense.

× If I don't have any information and if I don't understand how to resolve it, I ask for other help.

✓ If I don't have any information and if I don't understand how to resolve it, I ask for help from others.

'Other help' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'help from others' or 'other people's help'.